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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I liked the sponge descriptor at the start.
I was disappointed he stole the money. The DISABLED man's money-for all we know the disabled man now doesn't have money for rent! The penitent is affected by the sinner-the act seemed so much worse since he did it in a Cathedral.
At the end it reminds me of the fickle greek gods, and the story? The selfish vanity of the Worldy non-saved.
I hope this story redeems itself as humans inspired, little gods as well with upright purpose and convictions.
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