Thanks for bringing this to light. I have seen this myself a thousand times here in South Africa, yet we wonder why the youth act like they do. My theory is because parents are too busy to love and and care for them; they view children as an intrusion to their lives and not as a blessing. Well done!
Where is the rest would love to read more- you should post the other chapters. You draw the reader into the tale. I am a huge fan of fantasy novels and would like to see more of them published. So am nagging you to write on!
So true and courageous for putting it to paper. I could feel the slithering evil of the devil. We must always be alert- you captured this so well. Cudos (clapping hands)
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