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Review by Jose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh my goodness. That was BEAUTIFUL. Sorry that I can't say more but geez. I was just marveled. It was just shy of a five because I got confused towards the end. Maybe that's just my fault. KEEP IT UP!!
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Review of Eyes chapter 1  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I thought the title was engaging and was definitely the reason I read this. While the genre is not up my alley (through no fault of your own) I thought the piece was engaging. I do have some questions though. While the flashback in the beginning is a good hook, is it relevant? How does it drive the plot forward? Or am I jumping too far ahead? It is only chapter one :)
Anyway, keep it up!
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