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Review of the second person  Open in new Window.
Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4

Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics =5

Overall = 4.75


AQ’s Suggestions = Excellent work. It's an easy-to-understand piece. Keep up the fine writing!

"Doing your best is enough!" AQ
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Review of The Moon  Open in new Window.
Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 4

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4

Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5

Overall = 4.5


AQ’s Suggestions = Nice couplet. Need to write more and go deeper.

"Your value extends beyond this work!"

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Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4 Interesting physical format of your work 4

Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5

Overall = 4.75


AQ’s Suggestions =

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Review of The Tomb  Open in new Window.
Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4

Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5

Overall = 4.75


AQ’s Suggestions =

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Review of True or False  Open in new Window.
Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 4

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4

Artistic Voice and Imagery = 4

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 4

Overall = 4.0


AQ’s Suggestions =

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Review of The Tantalus Gene  Open in new Window.
Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5

Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5

Overall = 5.0


AQ’s Suggestions = Stat with it, your work special and clever

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Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5

Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5

Overall = 5.0


AQ’s Suggestions = Excellent piece. You have to be an athlete as well as a sports writing author.

"One step at a time. Persistence leads to success!" AQ

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Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 4

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5

Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5

Overall = 4.5


AQ’s Suggestions = Keep writing, you appear to be a deep philosophical thinker. You have much more to share!

"There is excellence in your efforts!" AQ

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Review of April Shadows  Open in new Window.
Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5

Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5

Overall = 5.0


AQ’s Suggestions =

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Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4

Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5

Overall = 4.75


AQ’s Suggestions =

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Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the author's work. A. Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4

Artistic Voice and Imagery = 4

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5

Overall = 4.5


AQ’s Suggestions = Unique piece. Very loving and caring. God bless!!

"Today's plans are tomorrow's successes! AQ

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Review of Anniversary  Open in new Window.
Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5

Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5

Overall = 5.0


AQ’s Suggestions =

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Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 4

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4

Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 2

Overall = 3.75


AQ’s Suggestions = Good work, interesting read.

"Endless opportunities await you!: AQ

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Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4

Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5

Overall = 4.75


AQ’s Suggestions = This was a great piece. Any athlete can relate to every concept in this poem.

"Your value extends beyond your work!" AQ

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Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact: 5

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable): 5

Artistic Voice and Imagery: 5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: 5

Overall = 5.0


Suggestions: I was blown away with poetic artistry!!! AQ

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Review of The Way Home  Open in new Window.
Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact: 4

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable): 4

Artistic Voice and Imagery:4

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:5

Overall = 4


Suggestions: Very warm-hearted piece. Not sure about your form, format, and rhyme?

Encouragement is a gift you deserve!! AQ

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Review of The Black Skull  Open in new Window.
Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact: 5

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable): 3

Artistic Voice and Imagery: 5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: 5

Overall =


Suggestions:

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Review of Prayer  Open in new Window.
Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact: 5

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable): 5

Artistic Voice and Imagery: 5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: 5

Overall: 5.0


Suggestions: Nice bit of writing. Sounds like Dr. Chas. Stanley. Keep the faith and keep writing AQ

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Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill

Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression:5

Plot: 5

Style and Voice: 4

Scene/Setting 4

Characters: 4

Dialog:5 Please check for plagiarism.

Grammar and Mechanics:4

Overall 4.42

Suggestions: None

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Review of Crown Of Ashes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill

Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression:3

Plot:4

Style and Voice 5

Scene/Setting 5

Characters:4

Dialog:3

Grammar and Mechanics:5

Overall : 4

Suggestions:

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Review of Paradox of Pain  Open in new Window.
Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill

Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression:4

Plot:5

Style and Voice:4

Scene/Setting:4

Characters:3

Dialog:4

Grammar and Mechanics:3

Overall: 3.85

Suggestions :A very dark piece. It reads like a suicide note. Obvious talent. Would like to read other work. AQ
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Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact: 5

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable):3

Artistic Voice and Imagery:5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:2 2 mistakes ( a comma & a hyphen)

Overall : 3.75

Suggestions: An interesting piece. Sounds as if someone as if someone is lonesome and needs a hug and a smile. Sent with a wink and a smile, AQ

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Review of Trolls  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:5

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable):4

Artistic Voice and Imagery:5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:5

Over all:4.75


Suggestions: I loved your subject! Expand your voice as you write longer pieces.

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Review of Elysium  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:5

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable): 5

Artistic Voice and Imagery:5

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:5


Suggestions: Keep up the good work!

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Review of Ragged Insomnia  Open in new Window.
Review by Artemis Quill Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill


Review Template: Poem

I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:5

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable):4

Artistic Voice and Imagery:4

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:4


Suggestions:


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