*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics =5
Overall = 4.75
AQ’s Suggestions = Excellent work. It's an easy-to-understand piece. Keep up the fine writing!
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 4
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5
Overall = 4.5
AQ’s Suggestions = Nice couplet. Need to write more and go deeper.
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4 Interesting physical format of your work 4
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5
Overall = 5.0
AQ’s Suggestions = Stat with it, your work special and clever
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5
Overall = 5.0
AQ’s Suggestions = Excellent piece. You have to be an athlete as well as a sports writing author.
"One step at a time. Persistence leads to success!" AQ
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 4
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 5
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5
Overall = 4.5
AQ’s Suggestions = Keep writing, you appear to be a deep philosophical thinker. You have much more to share!
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the author's work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 4
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5
Overall = 4.5
AQ’s Suggestions = Unique piece. Very loving and caring. God bless!!
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact = 5
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable) = 4
Artistic Voice and Imagery = 5
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics = 5
Overall = 4.75
AQ’s Suggestions = This was a great piece. Any athlete can relate to every concept in this poem.
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact: 5
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable): 5
Artistic Voice and Imagery: 5
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: 5
Overall = 5.0
Suggestions: I was blown away with poetic artistry!!! AQ
*A Poem Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact: 4
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable): 4
Artistic Voice and Imagery:4
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:5
Overall = 4
Suggestions: Very warm-hearted piece. Not sure about your form, format, and rhyme?
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact: 5
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable): 5
Artistic Voice and Imagery: 5
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: 5
Overall: 5.0
Suggestions: Nice bit of writing. Sounds like Dr. Chas. Stanley. Keep the faith and keep writing AQ
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A. Quill
Hello! I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression:4
Plot:5
Style and Voice:4
Scene/Setting:4
Characters:3
Dialog:4
Grammar and Mechanics:3
Overall: 3.85
Suggestions :A very dark piece. It reads like a suicide note. Obvious talent. Would like to read other work. AQ
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact: 5
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable):3
Artistic Voice and Imagery:5
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:2 2 mistakes ( a comma & a hyphen)
Overall : 3.75
Suggestions: An interesting piece. Sounds as if someone as if someone is lonesome and needs a hug and a smile. Sent with a wink and a smile, AQ
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:5
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable):4
Artistic Voice and Imagery:5
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:5
Over all:4.75
Suggestions: I loved your subject! Expand your voice as you write longer pieces.
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
*A Review by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
Review Template: Poem
I found your poem on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:5
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable):4
Artistic Voice and Imagery:4
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:4
Suggestions:
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