I clicked on random review and got this chapter of your story. I really like this and now have no choice but to read the rest of it. Good job on what I've seen so far. Hopefully, there are many more chapters I haven't seen yet. Keep writing; you do so very well.
I want to read more of this; it's really nicely written, and I love the story line. At first I was afraid that this would be something dumb and repetitive like Twilight, but it isn't. I think you have created my guilty pleasure. This story is really cool. Continue writing, please. I can't wait to read more.
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