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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really liked this poem. A decent flow, but I rated it 4.5 because not all the lines rhyme. You have some verses where every other line rhymes, but some you don't. Another thing is, you could touch up a few of the lines to make the music of it flow a little better. Sorry to sound so critical, but that's my nature. Again, you have a very solid story being told here, and I like the twist. Keep it up.
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