Wow. Very, very tight writing. I'm sitting here, with places to be and things to do, and I just got totally and completely sucked into this story and could not leave it. This is incredible. Characters and places vivid, real, with powerful and clear voices.
I have no gripes, no room here for improvement. I'm really sorry, but this is one of those "I loved it, don't change it" no real feedback sorts of reviews. But then again, the truth is the truth.
I'm hoping you have more like this. I'm going to go find out.
Thanks for the absorbing read. And just to prove it, I'm returning the GP's it pays with interest.
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