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Review of playing poker  Open in new Window.
Review by vesteria Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is an interesting perspective of someone being caught between two people. I have not been in this situation, but the thoughts of the author reveal the truth in his or her hindsight and everything that has happened. Life is hard. Poker teaches people to keep straight faces but still be themselves, not revealing anything about them until the play is over. The following line: "...because as long as you've won then you haven't lost." informs the audience that sometimes you can win and lose at the same time depending on what the situation is. Good job.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
That was a beautiful story. I actually cried while I read it. The little girl did a good thing for the elevator man. Keep up the good work.
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