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Review by JAppleseed Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This... is an interesting one. While typically I choose to stay away from these kinds of fetishes (not really my thing, you know?) this is a special one. I like the characters, and it has some potential, especially with the Tails option. I also like the idea of it being a virus.
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Review by JAppleseed Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Amazing story, although I feel it could be expanded on. I actually helped by adding a chapter to the story to keep this story alive and well. I suggest everyone do the same. We need to make sure this story doesn’t die in a hot fire. Help this story now, and let the author know you like it!
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Review by JAppleseed Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (2.0)
I feel like this story is far from being good. The amount of grammatical inconsistencies is absolutely absurd. I feel as though this story has some hidden potential, it just hasn’t been found. I feel like their are not enough choices in each story. There is some potential, it just hasn’t been found yet.
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Review by JAppleseed Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Great story. I only wished it had more options. There seems to be a lack of options to choose from. I like it, it just needs to continue.

Also... I’m not entirely sure why you decide to base this story off of an anime, but whatever. It’s an okay story nonetheless.
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Review by JAppleseed Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Nice story. I wished this story could have been longer. There is some hidden potential, but it just isn’t found in this story yet. I only wish for this story to continue and actually have more options to branch off of. This story has quite the potential on this website.
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Review by JAppleseed Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This story is awesome. I loved it. A true display of everything combined into one. There were some minor issues that I had, but those were only very minor issues. This story is really great, and I wish for it to be continued. Here’s to another good story by the author.
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Review by JAppleseed Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
I’m going to be 100% honest here. This really doesn’t feel like an actual interactive. Many options have yet to be filled out, and it just feels incomplete. However, I can see the potential here. There is a chance for this to become a great thing. It just needs to be found.
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Review by JAppleseed Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This was amazing. I loved the detail put into this story. It was truly shining. With Nel’s desperation to grow, it was cool. I hope this story continues farther on. This has true potential on this website. I hope the author creates more stories like these.
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