Wow. This was beautiful and deep in and of itself. To revel in nature...sometimes I too am like Gaia's mate and i sit and marvel at what is and how it came to be and how it grows and what makes it beautiful. Nature is a beautiful thing to revel in I love it especially in a raw setting such as a forest for it is by far one of the most natural things in this earth. I also grasped that this piece was mostly about emotion and awe. I understood why Gaia's mate couldn't really put what he was experiencing into words for the vast beauty and raw awe was too much. He was at a loss for words and I was able to relate to him in that way. Overall it was a very enjoyable read. keep writing!!! Can't wait to read more :D
Definitely makes me think of Winter Wonderland. First time I saw a white Christmas was when I was like thirteen in the mountains of the Carolina's, but man do I feel you. I want to see a snowflake fall. As cliche as it sounds I feel like seeing something that beautiful will positively result in a magical moment. Once I experience that I could then say I truly have experienced a Magical Moment, because something that simple being so beautiful could really impact a person in the natural beauty we deprive ourselves of because of how caught up we are in our daily lives and routines. So Candy I agree. This is my childhood dream.
This is cute. It could either be taken deeply or lightly it all depends on the reader. Honestly double meanings for me are intriguingly challenging and deep in some emotional way. I personally liked your poem a great deal. It was adorable and light, but to me it held so much more meaning and had so much more depth. Keep doing what you do you're doing great.
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