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Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Okay, this chapter is a nice touch! I sincerely hope that you continue this with anotehr chapter!
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Review of Big boys  Open in new Window.
Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This story is pretty good. I like it. It has a few funny moments as well as a few great moments from Z. Anyway, I hope to see the next chapter and see what Z and Ben will go through next.
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Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Okay, some of the chapters in this story are good. *Wink*
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Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really like this story. You've added some thoughtful depth to the characters that makes me want to ream more and more! Keep it up!
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Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Okay, THIS is pretty awesome! I can't wait for the next addition!
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Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I would like to see super strength!!
Where I'm at in the story:
#4. They are lost.

#3. Aliens? Or something else?

#2. Jack

#1. Lights, sound, action!
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Review of Cursed to Grow  Open in new Window.
Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I'd go with Choice one.
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Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This. Is. GREAT! You've really outdone yourself! But... I want to see if you can keep going.
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Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
this seems pretty cool.
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Review of Tough Muscle  Open in new Window.
Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is one of the best stories in writing.com I have ever read. Please proceed with it. I do have a suggestion though; when Ryder begins training, he seems to make faster progress than a normal person would, you know to emphasise the fact that he is special. So, what do you say? *Wink*
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Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This. Is. The. Most. AWESOME STORY I'VE EVER READ!!!!! I want to see more chapters of this story being typed SOON. You can tell that I wil be a big fan of this story fom now on. I would also like to thank the other accounts who added chapters to this little adventure.
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Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Try out that drink, please!
Thats the chapter I want to see!
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Review of Giant boys  Open in new Window.
Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Can you please continue with #0 feet? PLEASE!
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Review of Muscle Milk  Open in new Window.
Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hey can you maybe work on this chapter next, "He wakes to find himself so big he can't get out of the cave"? Please? Thanks! I appreciate it a lot. Oh and I'll be trying my best to, you know, stay updated with whatever's new in this site. I know that you may not be one of the people who manage this website, but I thought I'd tell someone... heeheehee...
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Review of Tiger God  Open in new Window.
Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have read most of this interactive... and I have to say, it is one of the BEST stories I have read. I especially proud of the fact that the main character is, afterall, a demigod. I hope that you will be able to put many more chapters to come. Thanks for writing it. *Wink*
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Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This chapter is the best one! Right after the one before it of course. ... Canyou do more?
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Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You should know: this IS one of my favorite stories. I have read every possibility on this but it is just, overal, impressive. I wish to see more additions to this interactive tale of yours just to see where it will lead. I hope it will update again... SOON!!!
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Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I would like, first, to say how honored I an to be in your group and for what it means. But, I must also warn you; I may be lazy and contribute very little to the group at times. However, what I can contribute may be really, REALLY good, so I'm going to try my very best at it, (considering the lazy part I just wrote about).
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Review by Jordan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
I honestly think that this is a good plot for an interactive story. A UFO is what seems to lasso people of all kinds. You have made a fan of me. I will happily see the rest of the Interactive Soty. Thanks for starting it; I'm going to recomend this to all my friends! *Wink*
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