I like it, in fact it’s so much like how I feel most of the time. However I’m not much good with poems, so I can’t say whether it’s good or not, I’m just telling you how I think and feel about it. It feels inspiring, truly and honestly, it reminds me of my own struggles to find the Truth. But I think I may have found the way to get there, I may hav e found the path, but not the destination. I don’t think mankind is capable of getting to that destination, at least not in this stage of time. Right now mankind is too consumed with himself to care about the Truth, all they care about is the lies that make them powerful, they like power. I hope that someday you do find the Truth, and I also hope you keep on Writing.
It is very sad, but I like it. It reminds me that we all should stop running around doing our best to get more out of our lives and thank whichever god we believe in for the things we already have. I think most people take the little things for granted and worry more about things that really have no true meaning. This poem/lyric should remind you that there are more important things in life than work and money and such, like family and friends.
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