That was a very cute poem. I thought it had great rythm, and a good verse, but mayeb lacked in sentiment just a little bit.
Overall, it was a very enjoyable piece, I can see it in a children's book with lots of adorable illustrations.
This is a very beautiful poem. I could probably say the same things about someone. Love, understanding, intimacy - they are just better described in verse, and you did an excellent job.
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