OMG dianne! i read some of your other stuff after the last one, this is such a sad story in so short a piece. i only read half of it and i was shocked how into i got. There isn't any critiquing i can add to this. well done and keep writing, ill read it!
This was a very well written and compelling story. I felt as if i was actualy reading this man's final thoughts on the fast pace of technology. i felt the ending was a little abrupt, personaly i would have tried to flesh it out a little more, but it works as is. thank you for writing this and please continue!
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