Very wonderful and eye-catching story. The title and caption instantly draws a reader in, and the laid-back style of writing keeps it extremely entertaining. The content itself is wonderful, mixing a serious (and very positive) subject with a non-serious and almost trivial thought.
The Korn reference is completely awesome, and is single-handedly the reason this deserves a positive review. It takes talent to mix Korn, Pat Boone, and becoming a grandmother in the same paragraph, and and the ability to seamlessly do that cannot go unnoticed.
Keep up the good work!
-Andrew
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