I love how you started this poem with the powerless observation of youth. Then as you go through the phases in your life you bring the reader on a journey of how through the passing of time you became what you didn't understand, but understood you wanted to end the cycle. I thought it was beautiful. Though I had dissimilar circumstances I had similar revelations. I, too have felt I had to let go of emotions that left me empty and going nowhere. I appreciate the beautiful journey of emotion intelligence. Hopefully it helps to heal others wounds or help them become aware of their own harmful cycles in their lives.
Continue writing and bringing those emotions and healing words to others. Take Care!
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