this is amazing! im reading everything vampire diaries i can while i wait for the 3rd season to come out on dvd and the 4th to be on tv. it brings up the youth water, which is good because in moonsong, elena still hasnt told anyone that she has it.
This poem is absolutely beautiful and I loved reading it! It has perfect grammar and spelling. The only thing I would change is the rating. I think it should be ASR due to the line about the once happy birds being bloody piles picked apart by vultures.
That was amazing! It reminded me of "thirteen reasons why" by jay asher, except it has a happy ending. I love how you blend the dream sequences into the rest of the story. Its a beautiful story and im glad you wrote it :)
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