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Review of History Contest  Open in new Window.
Review by Nish Laverz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
A great compertition for history buffs to enter.

Great promps make for great stories and poems and great prizes up for grabs
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Review of The Fog  Open in new Window.
Review by Nish Laverz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a well written story.

Setting: Greenton, a small town next to a lake, in Canada I think
Voice: 1st person. Written as though the main character is telling the story
Plot: It seems to be about the main character starting a new life in Greenton after moving from Vancouver.
It has a suspenseful ending. They think they have put and end to the horror, or have they?
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Review of The Eliminator  Open in new Window.
Review by Nish Laverz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
A good narrative story.

The Eliminator reminds me of the Wraith from Stargate Atlantis.

Keep on Writing
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Review by Nish Laverz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
What a great Idea to help poverty stricken people while helping WDC members improve their writing skills you are a very caring person.

Thanks for giving people this opportunity to help those in need

How do I get started as I would love to get involved?
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Review of Dollar Bill  Open in new Window.
Review by Nish Laverz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great bit of suspense writing in up to date setting I love the way you leave the reader holding on at the end with the cliffhanger ending.

I was scrolling down the list of twenty-some e-mails I had received when I noticed an e-mail from an unknown sender, which I almost deleted. I noticed the subject line: “Welcome to allthingsbeingequal.com.” Electric sparks danced on the exposed skin areas on my body and shocks raced up and down my spine. The erector pillae muscles in my arms made all of the arm hairs stand on end.
As my breath caught in my throat, I opened the note.


I would change part of this to: which I almost deleted. Then I noticed the subject line it was the same as on the note I was handed in the coffee shop
This is just my opinion

I like this a lot and would love to know what he decides to do and what happens.

Keep on writing.
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Review by Nish Laverz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a good piece of work.
The description of the equipment and bait are helpful to people who read the story and don't really know much about fishing.
It shows a father son relationship, a bonding session and the boys moment of pride at the end when he holds the salmon and his dad praises him for his catch.
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Review by Nish Laverz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Sara Kings work is a must read

This is a great fun story that should be read by all Sci-Fi fans.

The chapters are well written with great character and place descriptions.

The combination of space pirates and an immortality potion works great.


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Review by Nish Laverz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Another great piece of science fiction work from Sara. As usual it makes me want to read on.

Great character work again Sara can discribe characters in good detail.

I love the way this story is going you learn more and more about Utopia the more you read on it is great to find a Sci-Fi writer with talant like this

Great work again Sara
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Review by Nish Laverz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Another great read from Sara King.

A very descriptive piece of work with a great storyline and characters. This chapter is as good as the last

I love the character descrptions you can just smell Dunebuggie and goat.

I will be reading on. Thanks Sara for a great story to read
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Review by Nish Laverz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This story is a must read for Sci-fi fans.

A well written Sci-fi story using the imortallity and utopian ideas. It has great characters and the places are well described. I cannot wait to read more.

It's nice to see a female as a main character.
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