To start, thank you for reviewing my work "Thick as Thieves."
I enjoyed the emotion this poem carried. As well as the repetition technique you used; However, I do always look down upon the A:A rhyme scheme. With every line rhyming with the previous, it seems a little 'Dr. Suess-ey' for me and I feel like it could be formatted better. Also, I never judge people on grammar because if one should wish to publish their work, editors can manage any issues with grammar. So my only comment is to possibly change the rhyme setup, other than that, it was a beautiful poem.
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