Cute and inspirational story of following your dreams but knowing your limits as well. Internal conflict of the main character is presented well. An opportunity to present the external conflict between the MC and the rash and demanding attitude could be taken more advantage of to add more intrigue. External conflict with the father, whose antagonism is mild and subtle towards MC's dreams, provides a good background to show the source of motivation for the MC's ambitions.
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