Dear Naveen, you're very good in writing, but the line you wrote, "I'll be a writer someday", touched my heart to the deeper! Good work. And the fact, "Almost everyone of us, lead the life as dual thoughts", is having an almost at the begin. And its the truth, not all the person have this dual nature! The one who wipes the dust of wish, desire, want, etc from his/her heart, lives the life with a single identity! A HUMAN, WITH THE RIGHT TO LIVE!
Alok Mishra
Dear Sir, I can feel the pain inside you! But as a man spent 21+ years in this world, and 5+ years as a man to understand the readers and books, I can point out some certain facts about your questions.
First I stand with you, readers dont go for the cheaper books, and the most when they already have gone before for a better price!
Second, some readers, who read the original edition, dont opt to read the revised, because of money, and other that, their cheap thought "Some facts may change, its not going to change the whole book!"
Sir (as you're a teacher, and me student), you gave a very nice argument. And your line about Hitler seemed good that was "Although it is clear to
us today that Hitler was
indeed "pure evil",
Indeed He was evil, but you arm Him like pure evil, thats a point to be noted. Though being a student of MA English, I had to give up History, but I took enjoyment in reading your point of view. And for the interest, your work deserves to be rated a 5! Good work Sir!
An interesting story man! I read it so willingly... A very good story. I like to read stories, and your story gave me a thrill, a will, and an eager mind to read it quickly. The way you wrote, you must continue to write more! Keep it up, and as your gift I am giving it a 5 rating. Well done job buddy. You done a fantastic good did, Will look for much from you. Alok
Sir, thats really a nice experience to read your story. The way it starts, and the way it ends, is very much evoking the upcoming conditions. Though I am from India, but I too was reading your story on a Phone! Hahahahahahaha so we see that what are our friends today is only phones, laptops, pcs, and music devices (surely talking about Indians), where in Foreign countries you've many more advance things! And the way you wrote about, invisible in society! That was so good example! I liked that, and rated your good story to a 5. You gave a good message, rather it must be taken as a warning! To last, it was a good to read story!
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