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Review of Julia  Open in new Window.
Review by Amorette Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
That was really intriguing. I thought it was really interesting and I was sad for it to end. Are you keeping it as it is or continuing it? I think that it was good regardless. I really can't wait to read more from you
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Review of Yours To Hold  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
That really caught my attention. I thought it was well written and instantly drew me in which is what readers want. Are you turning this into a longer story? I would love to read it. Descriptions were quite strong and I thought well done. Definitely a great start. I thought your short description was intriguing so that was why I clicked in the first place. Well done.
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Review of Memories  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I thought that was really sweet. I've done the waiting so I can relate at least on some scale. There were just a few errors such as "your" instead of "you're" and "are" instead of "our", but they were quite minor. I would love to read more of your work.
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