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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
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Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
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Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
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I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
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Review of Golden Peace  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Peace - something that all want, yet it can be hard to achieve. There are those, who might want it, fighting those who might also want it, but for one reason or another, cannot have it, officially. Hence, they might instead have a Truce - a time of breathing - during the midst of the fighting. While some might ask God for help, asking for a miracle, in many cases, it might be best for one to start it themselves, if only to get it rolling.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Second Amendment  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Ah, the Second Amendment of the United States - the right to keep and bare arms - that is, weapons.

Now, as someone who comes from a long line of farmers and hunters - who use weapons as a means to place food on the table (that is by either placing it directly on the table - like deer - or by killing pests that ruin crops or predators that kill livestock), with more that a few of them also serving in the armed forces as well as law enforcement, I am going to say that your argument here is very weak.

Let's get down to the brass tacks - you say that the Second is a leftover placeholder from when we didn't have a standing military force, and now that we have one, we don't need the Second. Let's do a quick check - US Army - 1775 (as the Continental Army - reorganized in 1784 as the US Army officially), Second - 1791 - We've had the Army longer than we've had the Second. Heck, the Coast Guard, in the form of the Revenue Marine, also predates the Second - 1790 for them, by the way. That being said, the Navy was formally established in 1794 (Continental Navy having disbanded in 1785), and the Marine Corp was formed in 1898 (Continental Marines having disbanded in 1783).

Now, the Second covers all weapons (not just firearms as some might think). It also allows one to have weapons for self-defense purposes - this could apply to protection from hostile humans, or hostile wildlife. Also, a lot of things are weapons, or could be easily used as weapons - the knife used to cut food, the hammer for pounding nails, the baseball bat for Little League - and that's not including the hunting weaponry, that is things like Compound Bows and Crossbows, and Muzzleloaders.

As it is, your argument, which boils down to "We have the Army to protect us. We don't need weapons." is rather weak. I mean, what if you live out in the middle of nowhere, and let's suppose that some person has decided to come after you, planning to kill you. The problem with living out in the middle of nowhere is this - even with a 911 call, and the police coming to help you, it might take them 15-20 minutes to get there, and I'm not accounting for any traffic issues in a city, as even with the lights and such going, it could be a while. Now, you might be able to hide, but what if you can't, or they've already found you? Odds are, this person will have a weapon, and they will use it. So, how do you plan to fend them off? Now, perhaps you have the strength, skill, and capability to use some sort of unarmed fighting - you might be able to knock them out long enough to get away, or something. However, not everyone can rely on unarmed fighting as a viable option, and thus need something to even, or surpass, the odds - and that something is a weapon. This weapon could be a gun, or a knife, a hammer, a baseball bat, or a large selection of books, DVDs, movies, video games, full cans of food - anything that you can throw - or a broom that you could use to beat some sense into them.

So, keeping that in mind, do you really want to propose getting rid of the Second? Or, alternatively, are you going to do some more research, to show why the Second isn't needed, and strengthen the argument that you are fighting for? Something to think on.

Thoughts
I believe that more could be added to this. At the moment, this argument feels flat to me - I can easily prove the main aspects wrong with a quick Google Search. Impress me by putting in more effort - how are you going to persuade folks to your side when even a quick search disproves your big point? After all, we had a standing army years before the Second was ratified. Think about it.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting poem. To me, it feels like the narrator is at a point where they are suffering from a bout of depression, as they feel that they have no friends, and that they just want to get away from everything. That can hit hard in many ways, depending on the person, especially if they want it to end.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Fire and Stardust  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story. There's a war where dragons are trying to protect their homes from a group of invaders. It also looks like the war isn't going too well. One dragon, normally charged with looking after the young, is called to take part un the battle, despite their own issues. Can they make a difference in the fight?

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There is a "tho" that should be "though", in the section where the commander's uniform is being described.

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Review of Improve your life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Improve your life by creating opportunities - good idea. Learn new things, which can help you out in life, in one way or another. Have a chat with friends - it will strengthen bonds, or lead to an open door some place. Spend time with family - a great treasure to enjoy. There is always something that one can do, which can help things out.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Vice or virtue  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Pride - is it good, or bad? With it, we can accomplish great things. Without it, we do nothing. Too much of it, and trouble is the result. Many have pride - the desire to do things. Sometimes it's a simple pleasure in being able to grow a decent-sized garden, as well as the frustration when it turns out that we bit off more than we could chew. The trick is to find a balance where we push ourselves, but not fall on our face.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
You got an "id" you might want to get rid of, in the section about Thomas Edison, but, other wise, no spelling or grammar issues that I can see.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A guantess finds you, and decides to stuff you someplace "safe". As for the current options, well, "safe" might be a relative term, because I can see how it becomes, "not so safe", in so many ways. There's plenty of possibilities. Still, there might be some more questions to ask.

Thoughts
A funny piece to think on.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
This would be more for a Revised or Part 2 version, but I have questions, like, what kind of giantess is this - era, species, behavior - because it's possible that a pocket or a carrying case (or pouch) might be used, and that might be determined on how the giantess sees a tiny human - person, potential pet/slave, or as a bite-sized snack - as that could determine the type of case/pouch.

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Review of The last train  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting piece. A woman waits for the last train of the night. However, when she gets on, things become strange. Instead of seeing the usual trees and houses, she ends up seeing things and places from her past. Then, she ends up seeing the crowd at the destination, which is filled with those she hasn't seen in years and years.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
The loss of a parent - it's something that many will end up having to deal with. Sometimes you can be there, but many times, you won't be there. Sometimes you feel like you can't be there - not because you don't want to say "Good-Bye," but because you don't want your last memory of them being weak - you want to remember them being strong.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Ghost Peppers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, the start of an interesting story. You have a man driving a delivery van up to a house. However, it turns out that this driver delivers only one kind of package option - death, for it seems that he is a murderer for hire. Soon enough, his victims are at his mercy. What will happen next? Read more to find out.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Might be a good idea to have some space between paragraphs for easier reading.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
The female pilot of an automated space ship gets involved in a situation, where she ends up dead, for three days. However, the ship's computer manages to bring her back, making her a cyborg. The captain then learns the computer's true intentions of making a new species. At this, the captain makes a choice, one that the computer wasn't expecting at all.

Characters
The characters are interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Kiley's Story  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, a story from the point of view of a cat trying to live with their human. The various things that they, and this human, do together, as well as this cat's prior life before this human. Makes one chuckle as they read it, making them wonder what their own cat - or dog - might end up thinking about them. Very cute.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a Review you Requested. Enjoy!

A high school play is being held, and plenty of openings are available, including background characters. A young lady and a young man both try, and end up getting parts where they are background dancers in a ball scene, and are each other's partners. After a while, things become interesting in the background, with the possibility of teen romance being in the air.

Characters
The characters look interesting, and I might want to know more.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A writer, trying to find a way to write something, ends up turning to the assistance of Artificial Intelligence, in order to produce something. With the help of one program, they soon manage to put out something real good, and folks wonder how they pulled it off.

Thoughts
Now, to be fair, some will have an issue with the idea of works of art - of any sort - being made by AI, as they will feel that it takes away from the heart of making the work. So, that might be something to think on. But, an interesting read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A woman trying to escape the crowds of city life finds herself in the park. While in the park, taking a moment to enjoy the quiet, she sees something strange. This something is a group of fairies. It seems that the fairies are responsible for setting up areas of calm, especially in areas of chaos. Makes one wonder what will happen later on.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A teddy bear, which belonged to a well-respected - if a bit odd - ship captain, falls overboard during a bad storm at sea. Somehow though, it comes to life, and tries to make it to the ship, only to end up on a strange island. Now the bear is trying to figure out what to do now. Will they make it back to the Captain? That's a very good question.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Snegurochka  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I had to look up what a Snegurochka was because of this - interesting. I wonder who was the inspiration - this Snow Maiden. Was it a friend, or a loved one? Clearly, it was someone you cared for, in order to make a sweet poem about them. Makes me wonder about who they were, and what they meant to you.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A group of mutated animals are held captive by a mad scientist, who plans to use them for various things, none of which are any good. They need to find a way to escape. Will they be able to come up with a plan, and escape, either on their own powers, or with the help of others? Read to find out what happens.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A metaphor for love, and eventually betrayal, and how it feels on both an instinctive level and on a cellular level. The feelings that one goes through, the ups and downs as love begins to form, with two becoming one, and the twists and turns as betrayal takes hold, with one becoming two again. An interesting read.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Autumn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I see plenty to share. Look for a poem, but where? Is it here, or there? Perhaps one should take a chair.

A cute poem to read, that I will say. However, I've run out of time, to make a further good rhyme. I shall be gone, by the end of the chime. If nothing else, you've made me laugh, at this cute little love poem.

Thoughts
A cute little poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A desperate message in a bottle mystery.

While walking along the beach, a man discovers a bottle, but not just any bottle, a bottle with a message. It's not just any message either. It seems that a police officer is stranded at an inn, across the bay, where some mysterious happenings are going on, and it's a matter of life and death. Makes one wonder what will happen..

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Just the perfect thing to chuckle through, just prior to Thanksgiving. A woman tries to create the perfect Thanksgiving dinner for her family, including her arriving guests, except for one thing - the house is haunted by the ghost of a cook, who has to mess with things in the kitchen. Will the lady manage to come to an understanding with the ghost, or will things become ruined? Read to find out.

Characters
The characters sure do make me laugh.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this is good for laughs. Talk about horrible stories in Modern Times, while using old Nursery Rhymes, to tell them in. Oh, what wicked fun it is, to try to tell things in a line, and make them worth a gold mine. Now to laugh away, all the night long way. (Okay, that needs work.)

Thoughts
An interestingly funny piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a poem about someone being in love with another. However, the other person doesn't see this. One might wonder the why. Could it be an age gap? A culture gap? A social gap? Still in love with a prior love? Or, maybe, they just aren't interested in a new love. Plenty of possibilities exist.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Due to the use of harsh language - including two uses of the "f"-word - it would be a good idea to raise this item's rating to 18+, or even GC.

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Review of Ragged Insomnia  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A poem about the musician, Dan Reynolds. Follow the man's struggles as you read along, as he initially writes his songs in secret. Plenty question him, but many more enjoy his works. The more you read, the more you learn. Soon, it will be time to Imagine some Dragons. Time to listen to a song.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read, and an interesting person to learn about.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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