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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
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Review of Mutiny  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, I have to laugh at this - as it can be hard to make heads or tails of this tale. A voyage unlike any other, which is just full of trouble. A chuckle to be had, in every line, as none makes sense, at least at first. One best know their words, or they will soon go overboard, mad from confusion, as mutiny in the brain happens.

Thoughts
A funny piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Unrest  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A man with a mysterious past, and a mythical beast, decides to spend some time in a backwater town, well away from those who might know of him. However, something seems to bother him more than usual, even as he tries to enjoy the town's local festival, even annoying the local Duke. What dark secret does he hold that makes him worry with fear for the local farmers and miners?

Chatacters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Thank You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Sometimes there is a story to be told. Sometimes it is hard to tell it, especially when one doesn't know how. Sometimes though, best way to tell is through writing a story or poem, placed where others can read it. This can help one out, for now advice can be given. One would hope that this person is no longer in a relationship with the other, and has gotten away from them.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Cupids love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The love of a Cupid - the one who spreads love around, feels the longing for someone, but, alas, is not allowed to have any themselves. Makes one wonder if they will be able to find a workaround, one way or another, or if they will end up suffering so much pain. Can a way be found for him, or is he doomed? Read to find out.

Thoughts
A cute poem to read today.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Want to Join Me?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, running and exercise - the way in which one gets into shape. Sometimes the real trick is to just start moving, and try to go for like a mile or so, without stopping. Having a small goal helps - get to the first goal, and then the second, then the third, and so on. Every little bit gets us towards that which we want. After a while, we might get to our overall goal.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with your spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
What kind of furry are you? Or - in terms that those not knowing what this is asking - if you could be an anthropomorphic creature - such as the folks from Zootopia, Sing, Kung Fu Panda, and other such animal-like folks - what animal would you like to be? I know I like using wolves, but every so often, skunks, cats, rabbits, and other animals have their place in my heart.

Thoughts
An interesting in-and-out to look into and find out about.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Dear Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Me - a great contest where one can write about their yearly goals, and how they plan to accomplish them, so that they can come true. Many folks even have similar goals. The thing that must be considered is what one does to try to get them done. So, one must ask - will you be able to accomplish them?

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Ponderings  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Thoughts on Jesus, and if Mary knew that her yet unborn child knew just how much her son would end up meaning. One might wonder about that, as she had been told that he would be special (although all true parents believe that their children will be special), but, was she told just how special he would be? That is always the big question.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this looks like the start of an interesting story. You have a man writing a letter to his wife, talking about how it seems that the plan to turn another planet habitable seems to not be working, as Earth grass won't grow on it. Thus, he plans on returning back to Earth, asking his family to start making plans. The last line makes one wonder.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, but using regular Text Size, or even a regular font style, will make reading easier, along with having space between paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well, this looks like the start of an interesting story. A god or demon is trying to make a name for themselves. The method that they have chosen seems to be one of a mixture of manipulation, rebellion, and violence, as they cause a cult to be formed around them, and they wage war with others for power.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There are areas where sentences need more added to them. There are letters that need to be capitalized at the beginning of sentences. Also, space between paragraphs helps to make reading easier.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
An interesting sample to look at. You have a man, running away from something. Seems that he's been running for a while, as he seems to be getting exhausted, fighting for breath, trying to keep his body moving away from his pursuers. If he stops, he will end up dead. Can he keep going? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters seems interesting. I might want to know more about them.

Spelling and Grammar
You have a few sections that need capital letters, and there is one sentence that needs work on. Also, you might want space between paragraphs for easier reading.

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Review of My Psalm  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A Psalm - a spiritual lesson that could have been in the Bible, or a similar Christian-based text. Sometimes one has to do a little bit of reading. Does one need to be a Christian to benefit? No. However, within the book, is more than a few pieces of wisdom, which can help one out, regardless of religion.

Thoughts
A nice piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of "Star Wars"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In a galaxy far far away, and a long time ago - where did they come up with that one?

A cute poem based off of Star Wars: New Hope (at least according to reissues after the prequals). Basically a retelling, but I will say, love the word scheme - somewhere in each line, is a word that ends with the one at the end of the line. More than a bit of a chuckle.

Thoughts
An interesting poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Sir Bedivere  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Ah, the old problem - The knight rescues the Lady in Distress, but doesn't get the Standard Hero's Reward of welllll, um, Heroic Reward! Instead, he gets absolutely nothing. This, is annoying for him. Thus, he talks to a buddy, who tends to have better luck at getting the Heroic Reward. He soon gets some advice, and tries it out. Will it work? Read to learn.

Character
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A man's neighbor died. Tragic, to be sure. The strange thing is, the neighbor, whom the man barely knew, left them a pair of motorcycles. Now, he's trying to figure out what he did to deserve them. However, as the lawyer says - sometimes a gift is just a gift. Now, he has a bigger problem - how to take the bikes home.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Religion - a series of beliefs, practices, rituals, and the like, which involve the power and influence of some sort of higher being. This could be God, or some other god. Or, maybe it's a belief that there are no gods, but folks need to not do certain things, and to just be good people in general. There's lots of ways to think about things.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Just a rock.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A rock. For some, nothing special. For others, it represents the beginnings of imagination, and the wonder of what is under it. There is one big rock that I like to think of, which brings me to my childhood. Even now, I have a question that has yet to be answered - what is under it? Makes one think, that's for sure.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Punctuation  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Punctuation - means that you're on time. No, wait - that's punctual.

Punctuation is those funny marks that folks make for some reason - . , : ; ' " and such. Each has its own uses and meanings. They can end, or give a bit of space for breathing, in a sentence, which can make reading easier and important.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to Read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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Review of Try The Uni  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Ah, trying food you otherwise don't normally try to eat. In this case, Japanese-styled sushi. Made, in part, with raw fish, there is a lot to think about. Sometime the first experience is quite the memory - either you find out that you love it, or you find out that you hate it. However, there's lots of versions - some you will enjoy, and others you won't. So, try some.

Thoughts
Makes me chuckle as I remember my experience with frog legs - tasted like chicken that ate a lot of fish, and I wish that the place was that good again.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of King Of Beasts  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. You have a man at a park, trying to enjoy lunch before heading back to work. At the same time, a group of tourists have shown up to enjoy the sights, which he tries to ignore. However, things change when a group of lions show up, and they are on the hunt. Makes one wonder how in the world that happened, as the man now tries to survive.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Melinda Sequoia  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Trees, and what they know. Trees can live for a long time, and can see many things. Some can live for centuries, and plenty live for far longer. They can grow so tall, even a skyscraper can't top them. So, what all have they seen, and what all can they possibly teach people like us? There's a whole lot.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Insomnia, and the inability to sleep. Sometimes there's something that seems to keep us awake. A bad feeling, nervousness, embarrassment from some mistake, a full moon shining through the window, or too much caffeine from too much pop, soda, (or whatever you call that fizzy soft drink). Sometimes though, you have to just close your eyes, and try to sleep.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of It Gets Better  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Trying to find courage during times of darkness is never easy. Sometimes one can see the sadness in others, yet be unable to do a thing to help, for one reason or another. All we can do is hope that they can find the strength within, so that they can come out of this personal darkness on their own. Only time can tell in such cases.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to put some space between paragraphs for easier reading. Likewise, might want to bump this up to 13+ due to mild language.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of For Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Love - one of the trickiest things in the world. It is the most fragile thing, and one of the strongest. It is also the most valuable. It is something that is supposed to be highly treasured, for one puts a lot of work into it. However, when it is broken, it becomes next to worthless. Who knows what will happen.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, friendships that fall apart. Not easy to reforge when broken. This is especially true if the bonds had been there for years. Thus, the fracturing of them hits us hard. Sometimes though, we must move on. A bad friendship is worse than no friends. In such cases, we must walk away, and get on with life, forging a new pathway.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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