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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A school shooting - an event that many pray to never happen to them, but, sadly, there are those who end up having to go through one. Can't say that I had to deal with one, although my school did have a bomb scare once - long story short, someone had called a wrong number, said "Mom" and the listener thought that they had said "Bomb" - and the school had to be evacuated, with the students having to leave their coats and bags at the school. More annoyingly, if I recall correctly, I was in a gym class where we'd been walking outside when this happened, so we were stuck wearing our gym clothes on the way home. Then, there was the Shelter in Place drills, among others. Sad to have to think that we need to think about such things.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
Is there a special reason you've chosen to write "our" as "OUr", as you've done this twice in this poem? If there is, okay, and if not, that's the only thing I picked up on.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Ah, the days of childhood, and how one must grow up, and put such things of fantasy away. Or, do we have to? Can we still hold onto the wonder and thrill of a child, even as we grow up? Can we still be curious about the various things that go on in the world? Can we take the time to smell the roses? One has to wonder.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "To the Pink Moon" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
The moon, it holds many a person's wonders. People once thought that there were folks on the moon. Now though, to the best of our knowledge, there isn't, that we know of. The moon is important in many religions and folk beliefs and tales. So, just how important is the moon? Well, that is for each person to decide. Is it merely a ball of rock that affects the tides, or is it the source of power for lycanthropes? Only you can say.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
There are sixty seconds in a minute. But, what lies within a second? A wingbeat? A blink? A breath? A Tick? A Tock? There is something within that moment. For some, it's very short. But, for others, it can be an eternity. It always means something different for different people, depending on what is happening in that moment of time. So, what does it mean to you?

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A rather interesting, and difficult, poem to read. It tells the tale of a type of a rather special sort of deception, where there is an abusive partner (and possibly abusive parent). To all outside the house, the person seems normal, loving even. But, behind closed doors, that's when the monster comes out to play its horrible games.

Thoughts
A dark poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Waiting Patiently  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting poem with some riddles. A man has a close call with Death, who it seems has a sense of humor. Death gives the man three riddles to try to figure out. They take a bit of time to figure out, but then the man soon learns what they mean, among other things, which come true for them. Makes one wonder about things.

Thoughts
An interesting poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Black Skull  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Thoughts of a skull - as it wonders how it's able to think, as, without a brain, that's more than a bit difficult to accomplish, as one normally has to be alive in order to think. Then, there's all the other issues that come with being just a skull, and how that affects other things, which might be useful.

Thoughts
A cute piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
I wouldn't use double-space between lines, unless you are making a separation between the sections - like stanzas or chorus segments. Likewise, I'd use regular size and font for easier reading.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of This Old House  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Ah, the old haunted house. Is it actually haunted, or is it merely settling? Old houses make noise - provable, and proven, fact - many can testify to this. However, some houses hold some deep and dark secrets, ones that are not at all friendly. After all, in some places, one wrong turn, and there will be no sign of you in this world.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Suitor  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Now, scientific nitpick - spiders are not insects, they are arachnids.

An interesting little story, involving the deadly Black Widow spider, and their deadly courtship, in how they attract a mate, to try to have babies with. Apparently, even with the prior evidence before them, the males can't resist the deadly ladies.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Love is an interesting thing. A man is haunted by the ghost of his ex - well not her actual spirit, but more the memory of his love for her, and hers for him. He can feel her everywhere, feeling both the good times, and the bad. Then, one day, they meet up again. Will they be able to make a second go of things, or not? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "On Learning" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Learning is the ability to figure out and adapt new skills, and modify existing ones, so that we can, hopefully, improve upon what it is we are trying to do. This could be a simple thing, like figuring out that rubbing your finger down a sharp blade the wrong way is a great way to cut yourself, or it could be as complicated as trying to come up with a new formula for a unique game. Always something.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for entry "March 28 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It's nice to have a day where one can enjoy some time with family. Sometimes it's something simple, like buying lunch for them. Every day, one should do something, if possible. We never know if today will be our last chance to do so, though we hope not. We always want to enjoy things with those we care for and love. Thus, treasure every moment, for you never know.

Thoughts
An interesting entry to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A cute little poem about love, and what a woman wants from a man. Someone to be there, who can cook, who can make her feel loved. Plenty of little things, that she needs most in her life. All the little things can be the difference between love, and real love. These are but the start of how things could be.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Looks like the start of a potentially interesting story. You have a woman thinking about the various crushes, and loves she has had early in her life, and how she now has none by the time she has graduated from collage. One might wonder if she will ever find lasting love. Perhaps she will - there is always time.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Little Green Men  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Okay - this is a funny story. An alien from another planet is all set to meet a human, only it seems that the "human" he has met doesn't like to talk, and turns their back to them - a grave insult. (Of course, most reading this knows that the "human" indicated is actually as scarecrow.) Very funny indeed.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Death Chamber  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. A man goes to the police, in order to try to get a murderer arrested. Problem is, the police officer he is talking to is having a hard time buying the story. Also, there seems to be more going on, than meets the eye. Oh the twists and turns that this story has to tell.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of An unusual intro  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this looks like the start of an interesting story. A man is trying to tell a story to some children, only for a woman to basically say, "It's bedtime," and try to get the children to sleep. It seems that there is some sort of secret, where demons and fairies are concerned. Makes one wonder what is up.

Characters
Characters look interesting. I wonder if there is more to the tale.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
War - an eternal conflict. Many are the reasons for it. There have been so many, it's hard to list them all. Some have names that are lost to the sands of time, along with the reasons why. We study them, trying to learn from the past, so that we do not repeat the same mistakes in the future. We hope to be better people, and pray to never use a weapon in anger again.

Thoughts
An interesting poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Hunter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting short story, that reminds me of "Cask of Amontalodo", or something similar, by Edger Allen Poe, to a certain degree. A man is annoyed by the antics of another, who is a liar and a braggart, and thus wants to kill him. However, he wants to do so, in a way, that looks like an accident. He soon comes up with a plan - an accident while deer hunting. Will this plan work? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Tragedy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting topic to take on. Talking about the pollution of the ocean. The ocean is the lifeblood of many, as many have jobs that depend upon it. Many more rely on it to help place food on the table. However, it is being polluted, harming the various animals that folks rely upon as part of their job or for food. One has to wonder if we can save it.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Ah, the perfect story to read while eating greasy chicken wings. Young Ono Saggins has been chosen to carry the One Wing to its destination, only he feels compelled to eat it. However, trouble will befall him, and others, the moment that he takes a bite. Dangerous ones are after him, and the Wing. Will he be able to survive, or will he be fried?

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, having reflections upon one's youth. This is something that many do, as we look back to when we were children, who did stupid things because, we were, among other things, curious about what would happen if we tried to give the cat a bath, which might have lead to getting bit or scratched, or maybe, you had a cat that liked getting wet. Then, there's all the other stupid things. Sometimes, we still do them.

Thoughts
An interesting little piece.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, the old being punished for trying to find joy tactic. There are many things to find joy in - one of Nature's fine scenes, like sunrise and sunset, or in enjoying a good, well-made, meal, or in reading a book you like, or even being in the company of those you are friends with, and countless more things. Is it wrong to enjoy such things?

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Road Home  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A man tries to get home during a bad storm, as he needs to bring medicine for his children. However, every path he takes is flooded, or otherwise closed off. However, he has to find a way to make it home, for the sake of his child. He soon takes a dangerous risk when the latest road is closed off. Will the risk be worth it? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Pop  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
"The waiting is the hardest part," or so the song says. Waiting for something to start tends to fill folks with one feeling or another. Nervousness, hope, excitement, worry - the whole gauntlet of emotions. One waits, and waits, and waits, and then......




Go!

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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