The repetion of the line "a sad faced clown" really makes the poem poetic and almost song-like. What influenced you to write this piece? Does it have significance to you? Very creative, just interested in what moved you to write it.
I also lost several friends last march so I understand the feelings. I was surprised to see that you were not angry at God, rather accepting and you portrayed acceptance throughout the entire poem. Very uplifting instead of dark.
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