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Review of Why Do I Write  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Only the good writers can feel the passion they way you do when writing. To see and hear what lies deep inside banging on the door of your mind and soul to be let out.
It's what I see everyday but finding the key to open that door is harder than it seems, at least for me.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
LOL, Not sure how I linked to this but I gotta say I couldn't stop laughing. The MOOre I read the MOOre I laughed. I have my price gun ready for MOOre trouble with tribbles.

Sorry that's the best I can do right now. Sleep deprivation from the lack of warm milk.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I have a bookmark a friend gave me... gads, twenty years ago that I keep nearby.

"Dreams will give you wings" Never lose your dreams or your wings.
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Review of The Troll Wife  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Great story. It proves love is not skin deep and can be eternal.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Short and to the point. The politics of war at it's best and worst with the military caught in the middle getting the blame no matter what.

Sometimes I wonder what's the point of it all? If politicians had to fight these wars... would there be any?
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Wow! Great job! I feel like I just read the way I have been feeling lately only you wrote it better than I ever could have expressed.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I like this story. However, I am now curious as to how they got to this point in their travel/history. What catastrophic events made them create this colony ship? Why were they so many sections sealed off and eventually forgotten for so long? What true events forced them mutiny and travel to the previously unknown levels? Questions... yes! Still good story with lots of history you can delve into.
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