I enjoyed this. It is a well written poem. I respect writers that put a little of themselves out there when they write. it takes alot of guts to express something personal and have the world critique it. I think you did a very good job doing that and i hope you keep writing.
i guesss you could save ive been there done that. i have been clean and sober for ten years. but everyday, or at least when i get stressed, here comes that "stinking thinking". i know i was lucky but my parents werent. they were the ones that go tme started and now ive stopped and they still use. i really enjoyed this piece. it reminded me of somethings that are good to remeber every now and then.
that sounds just like my daughter. its amazing how something that can be so sweet and beautiful can also be as tough as nails. Sometimes the fact that they are tough and stand up for themselves is taken as a bad thing so its nice to see someone else thinks like i do. This was very well written.
This is reallly good. its hard to beleive its your first poem. the only suggestion i have is just remeber it doesnt always have to rhyme. keep up the writing you have alot of talent.
You have to be kidding about tweaking this. I wouldnt change a thing. I have a couple of friends who were over in Iraq or there husbands were and this one definatly hit home.
I really liked your story. It is so easy to identify with and I love your tone. You have a way of getting someone attention in the first few sentences, whichis really important.
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