alleycat34's (aliciafillio) Reviews

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#1937720

Review of Always

Review by alleycat34

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I enjoyed this. It is a well written poem. I respect writers that put a little of themselves out there when they write. it takes alot of guts to express something personal and have the world critique it. I think you did a very good job doing that and i hope you keep writing.

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#1937706

Review of A Messenger in Rags

Review by alleycat34

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

i guesss you could save ive been there done that. i have been clean and sober for ten years. but everyday, or at least when i get stressed, here comes that "stinking thinking". i know i was lucky but my parents werent. they were the ones that go tme started and now ive stopped and they still use. i really enjoyed this piece. it reminded me of somethings that are good to remeber every now and then.

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#1934264

Review of Princess

Review by alleycat34

Rated: E

| (4.5)

that sounds just like my daughter. its amazing how something that can be so sweet and beautiful can also be as tough as nails. Sometimes the fact that they are tough and stand up for themselves is taken as a bad thing so its nice to see someone else thinks like i do. This was very well written.

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#1932366

Review of Drown

Review by alleycat34

Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

This is reallly good. its hard to beleive its your first poem. the only suggestion i have is just remeber it doesnt always have to rhyme. keep up the writing you have alot of talent.

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#1932361

Review of The final journey

Review by alleycat34

Rated: E

| (4.5)

You have to be kidding about tweaking this. I wouldnt change a thing. I have a couple of friends who were over in Iraq or there husbands were and this one definatly hit home.

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#1930314

Review of Early Stages

Review by alleycat34

Rated: E

| (4.5)

This is pretty good. I've been published for my poetry several times and this is better than some of the stuff i've published.

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#1930312

Review of Enemies to Friends

Review by alleycat34

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I really liked your story. It is so easy to identify with and I love your tone. You have a way of getting someone attention in the first few sentences, whichis really important.

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#1928803

Review of Billy and his mine car of doom

Review by alleycat34

Rated: E

| (4.0)

it is very funny and well thought out