Wow....just wow
I did not feel that coming
The ending was honestly beautiful and had such a powerful effect (especially on my skin--goosebumps--brr)
❤️😁
It is quite confusing until you reach the middle of the chapter. I really like the mistery and darkness about it but you didn't make it understandable who the men were. It seems to me that in the beginning you just started writing about something random and than the ideas came to you. Maybe I am wrong and you had the story in you head,but overall I think it is quite interesting.
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