I really like the feel of this poem. It gives me a very peaceful calm feeling and a great picture in my head of just sitting, watching the world move around you. Very nice write.
Well done. I like the descriptions and imagery. Especially the line about frothed mouths and also the line about civilized tea. An enjoyable read. Keep up the good work!
I really like this poem especially the last stanza. The brevity of each sentence is very potent and I like that it drives it's meaning home. I also like the cold feel I get from the short, sharp wording and I think you did well in the writing. Well done.
I really enjoyed this! I know exactly what you mean by trusting a GPS when it doesn't seem to make sense. My GPS lies to me regularly yet for a while I gave in and continued a relationship based on trust however in the end I paid the price for being so foolish. Thank you for voicing how I feel toward my GPS although you may have been more polite than I.
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