I totally like this piece. I just returned from a two week camping trip at a creek. This piece brings back the fun times we had sitting around the camp fire at night.
The flow to this piece is very smooth and natural. It is well written and well thought out. You did a good job with this one.
I have read several of your poems. They are very good, and well written.
You did a very good job at expressing yourself in each of them.
I am new to this site, but not to writing. I have been writing for about 1 year. I am always looking to improve my writing and hope to be able to do this here.
This is a great question. I feel that all friends made in person or online is still a great friend.
It really doesn't matter how you make friends as long as you treat each other as a friend.
I would not be afraid of meeting a true friend no matter where we met at.
I am new to the "stitchcraft Group" and wanted to check out some of the writings of its members.
They is well thought out and well written. The flow is smooth and natural making it easy for your readers to read and get into the pieces.
Thank you for sharing them with us. Just one suggestion, I think that if you put each one of these up as seperate items your readers could review each of them instead of all of them as a whole.
This is such a sad and painful piece. One that I can relate so very well to.
Self-imposed exile is a very hard way to live. It cuts you out of your families lives. And belive it or not they want you to be involved in their lives.
I have lived this way so many years, not sure that I will ever find my way back to where I truly want to be within my family.
You did a good job at painting this picture for me.
thank you for sharing this
bama
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