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Rated: E | (5.0)
this is a fantastic piece of writing. the way you started and the manner in which story goes, that is fabulous. the story has an attraction and once the reader starts, he or she will read it till the end. However, there were some errors like the letter which Santa wrote was too long and the story switched to boring mode for a while. But, a good effort. Keep it up.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is such a nice article Atika...you forwarded your point to the reader in a graceful manner...A nice effort
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