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Review by Mr. Phorcys Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This is a good premise. I like how you are subverting the standard plot for a shrinking story, because there are far, far too many interactives of the macrophilic "ooh, you're shrunken down, spy on some hot girls" sort. I would advise you to possibly add more chapter options at first and see where it goes from there.
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