Good Morning,
Spring...one of the Seasons in your country which is the main topic of this work of art.
Reading between the lines makes me firmly believe that this Season is truly wonderful and I wish I can experience it myself as we do not have it here in the Philippines.
The last line serves as a wise reminder.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very beautiful and meaningful title:
" There's Still A Light
In Your Eyes "
Inspiring, motivating and powerful.
An affirmation of the positiveness proving that a person can have all that is needed especially the Light to feel good as well as to enjoy today and tomorrow.
As each day come and goes it is a great delight to leave the clamor and the noise and the stress behind and let the Light in life keep shining.
A Brilliant Piece.
Thank You for another worthwhile read.
God 🙏 Bless You Always.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very meaningful well written and nicely presented Prose.
It speaks of the many aspects of life and most of all focusing on the far away blue skies .
The lovely picture adds more meaning into this writing.
The lines at the last stanza are my favorite lines which are most meaningful to me.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
This is a very lovely picture of a sunset.
I always find time to watch the sunset by the Sea where we live near the beach front. There are also many people by the beach who patiently waiting to watch it.
This is a very nice camera Capture.
Sunset is truly mesmerizing.
Thank You for sharing.
God 🙏 Bless.
Good Morning,
That was a terrible fall and miraculous too.
I can imagine the pain and the bruise yet she was surely being protected by her guardian angel.
Truly an unforgettable experience and so blessed.
This is a poetry full of suspense and wonder.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Written for e Prompt.
Reading between the lines you share to your readers the sights and sounds of this particular place called
Barbados.
A beautiful picture of the beach adds more meaning into this work of art.
Oh... I don't like the sound of the frogs at night.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I am happy for that woman . She gained a very unique and wonderful experience.
So blessed to have the mermaids singing for her on that particular occasion.
A " Yuletide Song " that filled her heart and can never be forgotten.
Wow !
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
Reading between the lines makes me fall in love with the place too as in a place one can wander and wonder.
I can understand why so many people visited the place and why he said:
" Can we stay here forever ? "
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The story behind the song is about love and be loved.
In the first part it speaks of an unpleasant experience then as the story goes on...love finds a way that makes the story of the song most joyful and meaningful.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The husband grieving his wife and eventually he followed.
This is a deeply emotional piece.
It is also saddened the children as both parents are gone and what is left are the memories.
Thank You for sharing
" Her Father's Face "
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A deeply emotional piece that expresses one of life's greatest storms for children's wholebeing.
A mother who is needed most is leaving her children for a very unreasonable cause.
Sad and truly sad.
The question is :
Why bring this children to this world of unknown and despair.
A poem that is truly heartbreaking.
Write on.
Good Morning,
I smile reading the first line.
Yes.. God Bless You.
And more Ahhhhchoo and more Blessings...
A well written work of art describing one of the seasons in your country " Spring "
Reading between the lines I can feel I am surrounded with nature's beauty too.
The last two lines...
Hahaha
I wonder why ?
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
"Shaun cried."
This story makes me cry too. What is comforting is that his Mom is not experiencing physical pain now and surely very happy united with her husband in Paradise.
A very sentimental story yet very true. So real.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A wonderful story behind a well written and nicely presented Prose.
Great title " Escape "
Reading between the lines makes me happy for this creature who gains freedom after all and I wish to scream " fly high, soar up to the sky ! "
I enjoy reading this.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Shopping for a toaster and the discussion goen on that one of the customers who heard them commented in a nice way.
Realistic because this actually happens in real life.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A short story about Friendship.
The main character here is Ella. As I read the conclusion I wonder, is Tess , the ghost ? Or Ella ? Or both ?
The described place looks lovely inspite of the past tragedy.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very interesting and captivating title of a free verse poetry :
" Shadow Moon "
A well written and nicely presented work of art that expresses a reflection of dreams and realities in life In a philosophical and unique way .
Thank You for the Worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A reminder on how to live life harmoniously.
Very true, we all need and give love and kindness...yes to give and to receive.
This writing is very inspiring.
" Remember His will and command "
A wonderful conclusion..
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A Love Poetry.
The poem speaks of the true desire of the heart.
The desire to be loved by a man which is a very normal feeling.
The poem has a good flow who has special qualifications :
" who cooks with love
who reads poetry in
candlelight "
Well, hopefully you will meet this man of your dreams...
Thank You for the read.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Evening,
A funny story about brothers. The most amusing part is on how described Alex as never taking a bath. Hahaha
I can understand the reason why he prefers not to have his sneakers be returned.
Yes . I agree with the ending.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A Cat. A weather forecaster.
Her name is Mariah.
A very unique cat and a unique talent indeed.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
The last stanza is relaxing for Mariah.
Fascinating cat.
Fascinating poetry.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A short Essay that is well written and nicely presented.
It speaks of the facts of life of a writer.
This is written with truthfulness and all honesty.
Reading at the last part makes me so happy for you.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless You Always.
Good Afternoon,
A deeply emotional piece with a captivating and interesting as well as a very sad title:
" The Painful Reality "
Reading between the lines makes me agree that " it's painful "
But surely the pain will be gone and will be replenished with joy once you get out from a relationship that does not recognized your worth or your value.
Each one of us deserves the best life has to offer.
Move on with hope in your ❤️.
Very good that you write your deepest thoughts through a nicely presented poetry.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry with a strong and firm message to someone in your life.
A message that sounds like a special request or a plea and hopefully it will be granted.
A poem written from the deepest soul.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
The message of this well written and nicely presented lyrics of a song expresses strength and positive outlook in life.
A thinking of a winner.
The last three lines are my favorite lines.
They are powerful and true .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on .
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