Good Afternoon,
Hahaha
This is amusing.
Well, the two year old is dreaming BIG...
And there's a possibility that his vision will become a reality
Well.. let's hope for the best.
Thank You for sharing this very interesting story behind the poetry.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Poetry is pretty good and it's my answer and also is the top answer.
I enjoy writing and reading Poetry. There are times when the message is strongly philosophical and I always try my best to decipher its meaningful through my very own understanding and the challenge of doing it is invigorating.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A political issue expressed through a philosophical way through words and lines that show great concern.
The last serves as a positive message with a hope for a harmonious tomorrow.
This is well written and nicely presented and the chosen lines fit for the given title.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Oh .. the last four lines are very intriguing .
The Seasons in your country and here comes Autumn that reminds me of a very famous old song " The Fallen
Leaves "
A short poem from the heart.
Thank You for sharing
" That Time Of Year *
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Written for a prompt.
The love story behind the poetry is very inspiring.
It proves that in life there are second chances and the Hope that there is a brighter tomorrow as well as to Learn to let go.
A warm " Hello " makes a wonderful beginning.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that speaks of what is going on with the word from the rank and file employees to Top Management as in a path of specific directions.
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Perfectly Said !
The poem is nicely presented and very truthful.
This modern world technology wherein you can contact the whole world quickly and easily with just a click or a touch of a finger.
As in Amazing.
The lines about these 10 year old and 15 year old are truly happening.
My thirteen year old grandchild can program all the TV channels in his cellphone and watch the same show in both at the same time.
This quick understanding of these young people about modern technology amazes as well as fascinates me.
The last two lines makes me agree as there are many hackers and scammers in the internet and I am one of their victims.
A sad reality .
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless..
Good Morning,
The given title is captivating as well as very interesting:
" RELIGION "
I belong to a Roman Catholic Religion since I was born until this very moment of this writing.
I respect all Religions and as a matter of fact I have very good friends that are from different religions in our country, and I have some friends from different countries with different religions and we highly respect each other in this particular aspect.
Thank You for sharing a detailed information about Religion.
It is well written and nicely presented all the way .
A great information indeed.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Simon , a nature lover since he was a child finds his purpose and the meaning of his existence.
A heart- warming story about the man and the eagle that soars high up in the sky.
The setting is Perth, Australia. Good to know that as I have some relatives there.
The story is highly impressive from the start to the very end..
Wonderful and brilliant.
A great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A nice picture of a clock that tells time...
Those special moments of time, all of the time spent with people close to our hearts makes time so very precious.
Time, one of God's gift to us and we must use it wisely as time lost can never be regained.
The moment of time is right and we must do the very best out of it .
Thank You for sharing
" Those Moments We Cherish "
God 🙏 Bless...
Good Morning,
Written for a prompt and as a loving tribute to this Awesome Writing. Com. who celebrated it's Birthday in the year 2006.
This year Writing. Com. Will be celebrating it's 25th Birthday yet this poem expresses a wonderful message that lasts forever because of its meaningful descriptive lines that makes this poem so precious and so very special.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Happy Birthday Writing. Com.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A lovely poetry that describes the beauty of nature.
Along with the " Frosty moments in the snow is the wonderful sounds of joy all around and that matters a lot.
Thank You for sharing this well written and nicely presented work of art.
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
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Good Morning,
A short story full of suspense.
A beautiful love story turned sour and here's the outcome.
Janice is back and surely for a very good reason and this time is the one last time for her to strike.
Is Janice a serial killer ?
Maybe so ..
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
This can be a very interesting Preface of a Novel in the making .
I observed that in this Awesome Community there are so many authors who love cats and this is one of the interesting storyline about cats.
Good luck for the continuation of this.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Valentine's Day plays an important Role in my life forever, thus the given title captures my interest:
"Valentine's Story-
Andrew's Valentine's
Day "
The story is very inspiring. A story that shares and gives hope to the dying spirit.
This is a highly impressive Valentine's Story that makes my heart Smile with happiness.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented Acrostic Poetry.
The given title which is the first month of the year is very meaningful.
Wise and nice words that
form into fascinating lines that completed this special work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the wonderful read.
Write on .
Good Evening,
The given title is captivating and very important to me as I live in a beach area called Panagsama Beach
( Meaning, brotherhood beach) here in the Philippines.
I admire each line that completed this work of art
Reading this makes me love
" The Beach "
More and more.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
An Essay that gives great information about this modern world Cryptocurrency.... A digital way or form of business that I am not very familiar with it's functions of this modern world society.
Thank You for sharing this that gives the readers more information about this .
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow
..
It speaks of a political situation through poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
Each line is meaningful that fits for this special work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A poem with interesting title:
"Fulfillment"
Yes...We all need this in our lives as we continue our journey.
That we need to do important things as the purpose of our lives beautifully unfolds .
Thank You for sharing this well written poem with a philosophical message.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The given title is awesome and captivating:
" Through God's Eyes "
A free verse poetry that expresses Great love to the Most High with the the deep faith in the heart.
This is well written and nicely presented presented.
Each line is admirable
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I love other style of cooking food but I prefer boiling pertaining to seafoods that happens to be my favorite.
To enhance the flavor I may put the necessary spices and add some vegetables into it to have it more nutritious and delicious .
Thank You for sharing and for the opportunity for me to answer.
God 🙏 Bless...
Good Morning,
A 44 - line poetry with a great advice basing upon the given title :
"Handle Despair,
Hang On To Hope "
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a message of great positiveness.
Inspiring and motivating for the goodness of spirit and inner strength .
Truly a wonderful work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A story or an Essay or a very beautiful Prose to me.
It speaks of delightful moments in a life of a happy person and such happiness is contagious..
Wonderful title with great expectations and positive anticipations.
I enjoy reading this from the start to the very end.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A love poetry that is deeply emotional.
You have so much to give but nothing in return, only a broken heart.
My suggestion in this writing :
" What is love if your not willing to fight for it ..."
Please change the word " your " to : you're
By the way, I like the sound effect of the word
" thump, thump, thump;"
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on .
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