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That accident and the coma for three days made him dreamed of all those dead people and was able to talk and met them one by one.
That was the beginning of him seeing ghosts that leads him to write ...
A gift or a blessing in disguise.
Unique and great story to share .
Write on
Good Morning,
Perfectly said.
Very inspiring words and lines as a great advice to fellow writers, Indie authors in particular.
I am happy for you that you possess positiveness of heart and soul, and yes, Perseverance matters a lot.
Keep believing in yourself, I know that with such mindset, it proves that truly Winning or Victory is your Birthright .
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
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Good Morning,
An unforgettable morning experience.
As in Sweet Memories and the taste of delicious food lingers forever.
This is a free verse poetry that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Wonderful and very special.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A captivating title that speaks of firmness of opinions and ideas,
A Stone Belief,
A Genuine Policy
In life, one has to stand for what is right and that speaks of a courageous heart, mind and spirit.
Thank You for sharing this and for a worthwhile read...
Write on.
Good Morning,
His father's binoculars with a complete instructions on how to use it...When his father died , he put it in the attic and forgetting about it.
Then the opportunity to use it, he forgot where did he placed it.
And when he found it...the ghost of his father appeared... So, it is much better to use it.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
A family story.Raeni and John with their nine month old child Quinn .
It is nice of John to take good care of Quinn to let his wife sleep when he is not working or on duty.
I admire this kind of husband .
The last part of the story is funny.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning
A very meaningful free verse poetry with a captivating title,
Beneath The Surface
It speaks of the challenges in life in a philosophical way .
It also speaks that all in one there is hope for another beautiful day as I read the last few lines which are very inspiring .
Thank You for sharing and for the read
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Good Morning,
A nicely written Essay that describes a dearest grandson who as a child has his own brilliance and uniqueness and that is even up to this time.
A writing that has an added bonus: A Recipe if a delicious Vegan meal
Wow.. Awesome !
The recipe surely makes a delicious and nutritious meal .
A writing so full of love and the most caring heart.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
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Good Morning,
A very interesting Article that serves as an important Ad in this modern world of high technology generation.
It is informative, useful and helpful as it is the new world's latest trends .
Thank You for sharing
Toronto Hub For Modern
App Development
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
A very meaningful lines that completed this free verse poetry that is nicely written and it speaks of a very important person being described as
The Black Man
Descriptive of who he was and who he is and who he will be .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
A very unpleasant feelings and it's being expresses through a nicely written and nicely presented Prose.
And the eeirie feelings keeps haunting as in hallucinating or such a very unforgettable bad dream.
Yes..I agree with the last line that serves as a wise conclusion.
Live and stay with the Light.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
As you let despair in it fills your heart so all alone and in pain.
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry .
So when Despair knocks again disregard it, take a deep breath and Smile.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Evening,
Threatening to divorce because of snoring...
Oh..truly..
Life's not fair .
I agree with the above line.
What a lousy reason then
A short story that is well written and nicely presented.
Sad to note of what's happening.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Evening,
Young and adventurous
Jeff and Danny.
They better take good care of themselves as their parents saying No means they won't allow them to hurt themselves playing a dangerous game by the hill. Yet..nothing can stop them ..
Typical teenagers.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Evening,
A very meaningful and inspiring poetry added with a prayerful song.
Very inspiring work of art.
A free verse poetry that speaks of the heart's deepest faith ..
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for sharing
Love From Up High :
A Journey Homeward
Thank You for the read too.
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Good Evening,
A meaningful tribute to a brother in law, a friend and a hero.
He served the Motherland and was always a good and admirable man.
May your soul Rest in Peace, Captain Leland Eugene Payne of
U. S. Army
I Salute You..
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
God Bless.
Good Evening,
Interesting as well as captivating title of a free verse poetry..
Life's Moments
The written lines shares great words of wisdom to one and all.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Wonderful conclusion
too .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Evening,
Reading the given title , MESSENGER, makes me very curious to know what's this poetry all about...
Reading between the lines makes me smile as this is a Love Poetry whose message is being addressed to the special lady in your life that you truly love and cherish forever .
Wonderful all the way
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Good Evening,
A very interesting title that describes yourself
Ordinary Me , Not
Reading between the lines makes me believe the given title.
Yes.. there is no one on this earth like You .
You were placed on this earth to develop that special potential that only you possess .
As you choose to acknowledge your own uniqueness, you easily and lovingly express your own opinions and beliefs without any fear at all .
Praise your uniqueness and wear it proudly always.
I enjoy reading this work of art .
Write on .
Good Evening,
An Awesome way to describe money through a well written and nicely presented poetry.
Meaningful lines that completed this work of art and very unique too .
Money..one thing is sure:
Money is my friend and will always be .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Evening,
A very interesting topic that you are sharing here.
The given title is captivating.
Yes.. the world is getting smaller everyday in this modern generation.
The fact is , Traveling is not my interest but I love to know and to see places through reading brochures, articles Essays as well as books and watching shows with travel and tours including iteniraries for perfect destinations.
I am happy for my daughter who is a lawyer and as a conference and convention speaker that she travels to different countries all over the world, giving me reading materials of the places she'd been to including souvenirs .
I enjoy reading this
A Small World : Are You International?
Wonderful as it is.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
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Good Evening,
A song that expresses so many frustrations in life..The written lines fit for the given title that speaks of all those unpleasant happenings
Bitter Pills
A bitter life with bitter solutions does not gain a positive result is the lesson learned in this deeply emotional work of art.
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Good Morning,
The life of a writer spending most of his time in writing.
This is the important message in this well written and nicely presented work of art .
For a writer like me, the given title is truly fascinating.
The love to write is the essence of this free verse poetry .
Yes...
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Afternoon,
A Romance poetry.
Exciting, joyful and love overrules.
Fascinating and marvelous lines that completed this wonderful work of art .
As in simply irresistible feelings .
Hmmm How sweet...added with faith to the Most High...surely all is well and all will be well
Write on.
Good Morning,
Good and honest reasoning Randy.
Understandable as far as I am concerned as I read the conversation between Mom and Randy...
All because of the cat.
Haha haha
Great story that has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Write on.
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