Good Morning,
A beautiful poem proving to the whole world that True Love really exists.
Reading between the lines makes me so happy for both of you that shows love and concern in the most. Wonderful way.
The given title is captivating and very inspiring :
" Always There "
The poem is Awesome.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A Winning Piece.
Congratulations '
Well deserved award.
The presentation is wonderful.
The message is being addressed to someone special whom you noticed the actions and reactions about you.
Fascinating lines that completed this
" I Notice "
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Bed wetting..
Yes.. this happens but honestly I cannot remember a single time that I experience this as far as my memory is concerned.
The main reason that I did not answer of all the choices given.
But I know this exists especially when you are young.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Hahaha
I can imagine the mess but it's all worth it.
I admire the wisdom of Dad on not to yell his son that he learned from his past experience.
The short story is great.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Yes.. the
" First Project "
is Awesome.
Write on
Good Morning,
A song along with the written lyrics that speaks of the true feelings of the heart.
It expresses a sentimental journey of a love story between two people .
The given title expresses a wonderful Season of the year :
" Springtime "
Thank You for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Morning,
A HAIKU Poetry.
It speaks of a meal to be served late as well as it speaks about the flowers colored pink along with its beauty and fragrance.
The lovely picture of flowers and the clear blue sky adds more meaning into this concise, nice and wise work of art.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The story behind the poetry is unique in its own special way.
The given title speaks of its uniqueness too :
" Iceberg Castles "
" Reflecting brilliance of a land we see but never know"
This line is my favorite line that completely describes this particular Castles.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Reading between the lines makes me firmly believe the power of words both spoken and written that it surely give a BIG impact.
The given title is truthful and very interesting :
" The Art Of Emotion "
Each line written comes from the depthness of your soul that makes the writing meaningful and inspiring.
It is my great honor to have read this.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Morning,
WOW !
A very meaningful work of art. It shares a great lesson on not to be judgmental.
The story behind the poetry with twist and turn is highly impressive.
The rhythm and rhyme is excellent.
Truly a great talent.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A poem so full of love along with the Sweet Memories.
Nostalgic in every way.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Some writings that serve as a keepsake of the loving heart.
Very touching.
Written for a Contest.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Hahaha
So they have a lot to do and never gets bored to go to the place of Grammie.
Better not complain next time.hahaha
Very realistic story.
Very convincing.
Brilliant writer.
Thank You for sharing " " Grammie's House"
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Cats have a very good memory so no wonder they return to the place of your Mom where they have a sense of belonging.
This is a very interesting story about cats and I am happy for them to be back to a place where they truly belong.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Blessing comes in many mysterious ways.
Very good decision !
Hahaha
Interesting story .
Interesting in a way that a sort of a miracle happens.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for the read.
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Good Afternoon,
The story behind the poetry speaks of different characters in the drama of life as everyone is seeking and searching for the blessings with corresponding given effort .
This is how I understand
" Genuine Article:
Glorious Gains "
Thank You for the read.
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Good Afternoon,
The facts and aspects of life in so many ways are being expressed in this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry in a philosophical way.
The given title speaks on how to face life along with its blessings :
"Dealing With Life :
A Blessing Secured "
As one keeps living with faith and hope in the heart.
Write on.
Good AFTERNOON,
A very meaningful Prose with an interesting title
" A Warning To Never Forget '
Yes..never forget that we are all here to live and we are all here to die.
No exception.
So while being alive enjoy life to the fullest with the goodness of heart because tomorrow you surely die
This is how I understand this writing.
Thank You for the read.
Write on
.
Good Afternoon,
Reading between the lines I can vividly picture the beauty of assorted flowers in this area.
A true beauty as far as your eyes can see.
The familiar countryside of your very own England.
So blessed with this wonderful panorama.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that shares a very caring heart.
Yes.. I agree with the last line that serves as a sad conclusion.
Life is not easy for her.
Thank You for sharing
" Darryl Is Her Name "
And what a lovely name.
Write on.
Good Morning,
I laughed loudly reading the part that the house looked like a hospital.
Hahaha
I can imagine.
Good that the husband loves the change of color.
Nice story.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A wonderful bonding time between father and son and the son loves to listen to bedtime stories.
Admirable father in making this time a part of childhood Sweet Memories that will be unforgettable.
Interesting story that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Interesting e intriguing title :
" What Animals Make The
Best/ Worst Pets "
Reading between the lines that share your point of view and your answer to the question
is Cat or Cats giving your own reason about it.
I respect your very own personal opinion.
My suggestion in this writing :
Please divide this into three paragraphs for a nicer presentation.
" because of the this pet .. "
Please delete the word the..
" dinning table "
Please change the word dinning to : dining table
Once corrected you will see the difference.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Interesting title:
"A Cherry Tree In
China "
Wonderful lines that completed this work of art.
Reading between the lines I can vividly picture the tree so lovely and everyone is enjoying the sight.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that speaks highly of the love of this game popularly known as Bowling.
The given title expresses much activities ahead:
"Going Bowling On
New Years Day "
The beginning of the year and it is full of enthusiasm.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very beautiful and wonderful Valentines POETRY.
It is well written and.nicely presented all the way.
A poem proving that True Love finds a way to be with each other and such great feelings truly matter.
The poem has a good flow with a very nice rhythm and rhyme.
Happy VALENTINES Day
Both of You...
Write on.
Good Morning,
Jeff has a good teacher.
Janet serves as his inspiration as even at his young age, Janet already motivated him to be a good storyteller.
I am happy for Jeff and for Janet too.
This is a wonderful short story and I am so glad to have read this.
Write on.
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