Good Morning,
Another one of your well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
It speaks of Lies yet allowing the truth to always come out.
The message is great in its own unique way and style of writing.
The title is interesting like the poem itself.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A poem that has something to do with nature and with an interesting title :
"Fog Rising"
The written lines fit for the given title.
Yes..very true it is another " iced rained
winter's day" and surely it is very, very cold.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Happiness fills the air in this beautiful family story.
So blessed to have this new born son that strengthens their relationship.
Truly "A Baby's Magic "
Wonderful story all the way that is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Looking at the picture makes me hungry too .
Interesting Meal. As in a unique combination...a heavy meal after all and surely I love and enjoy eating this.
Interesting and very inviting.
Thank You for sharing this well written and nicely presented short story.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Interesting Word Search or Puzzle and it's about
BOOP.
I have read plenty of
BOOP and the cute.
It is fun solving this but I did not reach 25..
Hahaha
Better Luck next time.
Fascinating Boop indeed.
Thank You for the joyful search .
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A well written poetry from the depthness of your soul.
Reading between the lines makes me believe that the Power Of GOD lives in all that you do and all that you are. It is your gift to express God's presence through your life . Being the man as you are, you choose the road to health and serenity.
Enjoy the journey as you fulfill your potential as life unfolds.
Stay Blessed.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A writing whose lines speaks of a person with varied experiences in life yet the caring heart and spirit remains.
It has a good flow and with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
The last two lines are very important and valuable lines.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A reflection of a list relationship.
Sad but this is truly happening in life. It is a matter of how one can let go and move on for a better tomorrow .
A very meaningful work of art.
This is well written and nicely presented as it is.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very interesting and unique story about Sherry, the chicken.
A lesson learned and the great realization of not being perfect at all.
A square egg can truly lead to.much curiosity to everyone including myself .
I admire the creativeness.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A well written and nicely presented poem about this sports popularly known as Golf based on the given title : " Perfect Golf -
A Longing Focus "
The poem expresses an important and special message about this game in a philosophical way.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Oh...Alone with tears instead of being alone, free and happy.
The heart of a mother surely makes the tears flowing freely .
A short story written with all honesty with deepest emotion.
For me, it is a very sad story.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A visit to Sri Lanka that also serves as a great information about this country as you brilliantly write your observations and impressions as well as varied descriptions of this wonderful place .
Thank You for sharing this in a well written and nicely presented
Fantastic writing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title speaks of the realities in life "Beliefs and Desires "
Each one of us has our very own beliefs and desires and it is up to us on how to express and do it as we continue our journey.
This is how I understand this very meaningful and well written poetry.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A nice poem with great expectations as it expresses of sports people gathering around for this special day.
Inspiring title :
" True Rewards :
Tomorrow Flying
Higher "
The written lines fit for the given title.
A poem so full of life.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very meaningful and inspiring free verse poetry that sounds like a beautiful Gospel Song to me.
Wonderful and admirable lines that completed this work of art with an interesting title :
"What A Friend We Have In JESUS "
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A great summer experience being expressed in poetic words and lines that completed this special work of art.
Yes...Sailing is great and exhilarating. I used to do it with my brother that serves as Childhood Sweet Memories.
Wonderful poem.
Wonderful " Summer Sailing "
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very interesting and captivating title:
" To My Greatest
Granddaughter "
A letter written centuries ago that be a good part of a Museum Special Display.
A letter that for me also a Rare Gem.
Fascinating.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
A short story that expresses the many changes of life situation and the true meaning of the word
" I Love You "
Touching as it speaks of the past relationship between mother and daughter and the present condition of the mother.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented work of art that speaks of a special happening on this particular Saturday.
It speaks of some names of person that has something to do with the activities of the day.
A nice poem about life.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A Love Poetry with a captivating and interesting title :
" Love Is Like A
Feeling "
Admirable and wonderful lines that completed this well written work of art.
The lines at the last stanza are my favorite lines and most meaningful to me .
Write on.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that speaks of a very unpleasant situation or condition as the given title said it so :
"Love Turned To Hate "
Yes...this is happening and it is a very sad reality.
The poem has a good flow and is nicely written and nicely presented.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A story that makes me believe that there is always a good reason for everything and God surely makes a way.
Terry is so blessed to have you in his.life.
A very touching story with an inspiring title : " Life Is What You
Make It "
I agree.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The last two lines makes me smile and firmly believe in destiny.
Two hearts finding each other and binded and bonded with the true feelings of the heart.
Wonderful title that fits for the Valentines month :
" So In Love "
And that is all that matters.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A nicely presented free verse poetry with an interesting title :
"Little Firefly "
The poem also speaks of the beauty of nature :
The rainbow, the sunset and the sunrise that makes this work of art more meaningful.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Our love for the dearest Sweet Jesus is the main topic in this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.Great title :
" A Love for JESUS;
Our Friend And Savior*
Yes ! Very true and wonderful lines that completed this work of art
..admirable lines indeed
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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