Good Morning,
Reading between the lines of the red letter words makes this free verse poetry truly RED
as in Roses are Red.
The given title fits for the written lines :
" The World Is Red "
Fascinating work of art.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Merry Christmas !
Good Morning,
Hahaha This is fun and truly a joyful read.
Satirical in its own unique way .
Written for a contest ?
Oh...Year 2020
Amusing story with a terrible yet so funny Ending.
A well written and nicely presented in a very unique and funny way.
Thank You for the read.
Write on .
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Good Morning,
The title makes me very curious to know what's this all about as Fishing makes a precious part of my individuality.
My father was the greatest fisherman when he was alive and taught me and my younger brother on how to catch fish using a hook and line. This is a part of my writings in my Port with a title Trip To Pescador Island .
Reading between the lines of your fishing story makes.my mind wanders and wonders with amazement seeing those living creatures as a part of the beauty of nature in your fishing area. Inspite of not catching any fish to gain such a pleasure of a lovely and lively sight truly matters a lot.
A short story with a BIG impact ...
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Good Evening,
This is informative, useful and helpful.
Is this kind of survey applicable worldwide or only in a particular country .
In our country, the Philippines, a survey report is needed especially when you process the title of the land either inherited or being bought. It goes well also as you can have a complete report on the boundaries of your land in the north, south, east and west and everything is clearly reported.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A nicely written Love Poetry with the title
"LOVE"
Admirable lines that completed this precious work of art.
I love singing Love Songs and some of the lines of a song always stay in my heart as I sing it with deep emotion like these lines of different songs :
" For to love and be loved is a wonderful thing"
" Love is real "
" Love is a many splendored thing "
Oh... the list is endless all in one I may say:
Love is the greatest
Thank You for sharing...
Write on and Stay in Love...and importantly Love yourself first so you can love others .
Merry Christmas !
Good Evening,
I love this...
Simply elegant Gazebo.
Very nice picture of a Gazebo.
We have one at home and it's made of local materials like bamboo and Nipa or palm leaf for the roof. Everyone who sees it commented:
How nice ! Very Cute...
As in very native and personalized.
Yes.. Gazebo adds attraction to the house.
Thank You for sharing.
Merry Christmas !
Good Evening,
Great title.
Great Poem.
Great Journey.
Actually, Traveling is not my thing . I don't like to wait when there 's a delay of flight and a thousand one reasons that I don't love traveling...but I agree with the lines written :
"Journey through a
book "
Yes...
That's me... I read books and brochures and fliers and that's marvelous. As in no sweat but happy.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Good Evening,
A brilliant writer with a brilliant story.
I feel like I am watching a Telenovela with much eagerness and my full attention focused to what I am reading .
A Happy Marriage and the betrayal that caused the break up. Painful as in heart breaking yet True Love has its own ways of rekindling the light of the dying love and at the end they were both meant for each other.
A combination of sadness and joy ...
Highly impressive writing.
I SALUTE YOU...
Write on.
Merry Christmas !
Good Evening,
A lot of Numbers..Numbers are.my weak points. All my siblings are brilliant with numbers and they all graduated as scholars because they excelled in subjects that deals with Numbers. They are all successful in business and told me, " you must know your numbers to count your money when you get rich "
I replied .. I don't want to get rich . I wish you all get rich and surely you will share me your blessings...and yes..they are all very generous to me . Hahahaha I love them with their brilliance in numbers
Back to the review...As far as my opinion is concern about dreaming with numbers...it is a sign and it is a good sign of progress .
My husband has other beliefs about dreaming of numbers he used it in buying A Game ticket not lotto but the local games that wins not big amounts. He tried it following the number in his dreams. He won three times already .
I told him, next time buy a lotto ticket .. he laughed and replied .. I might be a millionaire and you do not want to get rich .
Haha haha a taste of my own medicine
...on second thoughts...why not buy a lotto ticket out of that numbers in your dream..
Good luck.
God Bless 🙏.
Merry Christmas !
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Good Evening,
The given title is wonderful in its own precious way:
" God's Creation "
Reading between the admirable lines that fit for the given title makes me feel joy and grateful for being here in this world enjoying life and the lovely sight of his creations.
A prayer at the ending of the poem makes this work if art more meaningful.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on ..
Merry Christmas!
Good Afternoon,
Oh..the mouse and car are playing hide and seek... I can imagine the Mess .
Yes...Mystery solved.
This is a very realistic or convincing story that happens in real life.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way .
Wonderful read .
Write on.
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Good Afternoon,
Hahaha
I laughed actually but deep in my heart I know the feeling of losing a cat actually many cats.
I laughed because I taught it was about her boyfriend James, and she does not want to talk about it
Oh .. Jane was wrong and so did I.
Anyway, it's really worth crying and that adds more meaning to their friendship.
Nice story.
Write on.
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Good Afternoon,
A Love Poetry.
Descriptive of two people and they love each other truly and faithfully.
Meaning they share happiness and sadness as two hearts beat as One.
Be Very Happy and keep loving beyond forever.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A Biographical Essay and the title is a question about yourself:
" Am I Sick ? "
My answer is No ..
You're not sick. You're just in love ...
Actually my answer is a lyrics of one of the songs that my Mama taught me when I was at grade school and won first prize in the singing contest.
Well..back to the review...
Nowadays, falling in love with the same gender is accepted .
In the past generations it was truly frowned.
I have a brother- in - law who is gay , a very rich antique collector, he's the younger bro of my husband. He's in a relationship with a Surgeon , good looking too...and they are living harmoniously for 12 years now. The community accepted them and they are happy .
What matters for me is the goodness of the spirit and kindness of heart .
I believe in destiny as well as the choice to be happy...
Follow your heart .
Write on.
Merry Christmas !
Good Afternoon,
Interesting Poll
With an interesting title
Women Bodies
I am a woman and I take good care of my body in my own special way.
In the poll there are five descriptions
:
Fat, Thin, Voluptuous,
Muscled and Athletic.
For me, I wish to answer the poll according to what I desire of what or how do I look with my body ?
Hahaha
I wish to answer two words, either beautiful or Sexy body.
I belong to both...so I did not answer the poll, but I enjoy reading this.
Hahaha Funny me ... That's me.
Naomi..
Thank You for the read.
Write on
Merry Christmas !
Good Afternoon,
An Essay or a Prose that is well written and nicely presented and it shares a great story based on your life and your very own experience ..
The given title is very meaningful as well as inspiring .
Glad to note that in your lonely moments you can play a beautiful music through your Harmonica.
Keep playing the music of your life and the Music of life itself .
Great writing .
Write on.
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Good Afternoon,
The given title is captivating and so true that they exist
"The Troubled Souls"
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
It speaks of unfortunate lost souls.
Reading between the lines especially the last line , it shows the Poet's very kind and caring ❤️.
God Bless 🙏 You Always
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Merry Christmas !
Good Afternoon,
Acrostic Poetry is a poem that I like to write and I like to read the works of others too.
This is a nicely written and nicely presented Acrostic poetry with a nice title too.
TOMORROW
Not yesterday, not today but TOMORROW...
A day away...
I admire each line that completed this work of art .
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
MERRY CHRISTMAS !
Good Afternoon,
A work of art with an interesting title
" Forever If I Have To "
A special message being addressed to someone very close to the heart and being called
" beloved "
A poem from the heart that is full of longings to see her again to be back in his arms full of love...
It's Christmas time, may the magic of Christmas makes your heart sings of joy and to be together again .
The poem is well written all the way.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Merry Christmas !
Good Afternoon,
A very interesting story about Gnome...somewhere in another world and surely they are all around surrounding us without noticing them.
I admire the character of Flick.... very alert...very observant... where's his mother ? Only his father was being mentioned.
A story so unique and so nicely written.
I have nothing to add and to correct but very curious about their world.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Merry Christmas !
Good Afternoon,
Andy, the four year old child who loves the zoo is full.of excitement as her mom told him that he was dressed up because they're going to the zoo.
Surely Andy will have a great time.
A short story that is well written and nicely presented.
Write On.
Merry Christmas !
Good Morning,
What happened ?
Did you eat something that.makes you vomiting ?
I can imagine the sound effect as I read between the lines.
Better drink hot tea or hot coffee with a toasted warm bread to give a relief to a disturbing stomach..so you can celebrate Christmas comfortably.
Written for a prompt...
Very convincing.
Write on.
Merry Christmas !
Good Morning,
A sad story...in answer to the question...
" Am I That Bad Guy "
My answer is No...
After 23 years...justice was not given to your sister....so you did it yourself... Very true .. I have three brothers who loves me very much.. had this happened to me, surely revenge will be done ..
Killing is a great sin and surely God understands the reason behind why you did such a crime ...that is my very own honest opinion...because if they did it to a very young girl ..are they not doing it again and again to other people ?
So..they must stop.
I feel like I am watching a horror movie and justify the revenge.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Merry Christmas !
Good Morning,
The title speaks of an exquisite Beauty and very captivating :
SPLENDOUR
Reading between the lines makes me understand why such title was given .
Reading it as very nicely written Poetry .with a sad ending .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Morning,
Facing War and the betrayal story behind the poetry is very touching and a sad reality .
This is a well written and nicely presented work of art.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful and nice.
The given title expresses the sadness of the story and the pain of being betrayed.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
MERRY CHRISTMAS !
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