What a wonderful story! I am so happy I stumbled across it! I feel that it really fits in with the theme of vanity out of the Seven Deadly Sins, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I also like how you wrote it from the painting's point of view, which was very creative.
I only noticed a couple of grammatical errors, but other than that, it was awesome.
Keep up the great work!
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