I love the concept to this piece and have often dreamed of such a life. This is inspiring to me and I believe it always will be. To me this is how life should be lived a true journey. Very well written, great job.
I absolutely love yoga and follow it by meditation. This is a very beautiful thing to find in a world stuck on overdrive and fast forward. Effort = success, none of this comes fast and everybody's mind operates different. I wish you the best of luck and may you find your true peace.
I personally love how you took something so overlooked and gave it a story of it's own. For a short poem you have incorporated a full life cycle and beautifully made it flow. great poem. write on
Wow, this was a truly gripping experience for me. I find it extremely difficult to actually be a part of what I'm reading and you absolutely sucked me in. The only minor thing that i could point out is the sentence- I will not take another man's life or risk my own unless I believe I am truly your last resort. When you say I will not take another man's life, to me I get the impression it is a man who is the vigilante yet I know you have clearly stated if was a female. This is the only thing I could possibly even point out. Riveting and very well written.
I can always appreciate a piece with real raw emotion in it.This is a unique piece to me, I enjoyed reading your perspective on the ever growing world.
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