It is really a good one with good sense. It is very philosophical an very deep. I liked the line 'A rebellious streak poked up its head when I was just a teen'. It is very catchy and most of them will experience it. The rhyming is good but you have to concentrate more on this part..
I found it to be a satirical poem on todays love. This will be the case in most of the times. The title "two faced lovers" is apt for this. I like the lines 'you are a two faced lover so I will be a vengeful lover'. it is interesting. It will be more catchy if it is rhymes good.
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