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Review of New York  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an understated description of events at an airport. It was very well written.
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Review of Flight 213  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The story had me on edge. I liked it.
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Review of A Very Fine Woman  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It was a very good character study. She was really cold blooded.
The clue to the husband's affair was brought out very subtly.
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Review of November, 1518  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It was very well written. The conclusion was foreshadowed in a very subtle way. I missed it the first time.
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Review of Two Faces  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The story had very good physical descriptions. The emotions are expressed quite well too.
I wsonder if the story came from the author's memories.
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Review by John Warren Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
The story is incomplete. WendyT should finish it.
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Review of The King's Quest  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
An interesting story. It is well written.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very well written. The author was careful in laying the foundation for the twist at the end.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This looks like it might become an interesting story. I hope to see the rest soon.
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Review of The Nightmare  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good descriptions. Ksascubadiver writes like somebody who was there.
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Review of Boom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
The story needs work. The sentence "I felt bad, he was new but I liked him." Is repeated. The first time there is no comma but the second time there is one. And the word near the end is "stopped", not "stoped." It could be a good story.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good story. It is almost as if Lizzy had lived through the events in the story.
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Review of I Dream of Utopia  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
An interesting story. It was extremely well crafted.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very good description of childhood memories.
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Review of THE OLD HOUSE  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Outside of two misspellings ("mine" for "mind" and "Mohter" for "mother") it is a well written story.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A very interesting story. I know cats and that is how some of them are.
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Review of The Loving Couple  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Overall it is a good story. i LIKE THE IRONY OF IT.
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