Quite a piece...the very concept of narration in poetic terms makes the work re-readable, the reader gets an idea of how it will all sink to, but expectations presented create a sense of know-how or rather how the proposal will be made...its the best yet...I love it.
'We cannot tell' indeed; your piece of work is worth the while, a poet in the making or rather just another day of letting words say it all... The expressions enveloped in the phrases and utterly pinning symbolisms makes the poem throb with an air of excitement and mystery all in all. Not too much, not too little- it's just right. You see no flaws in reciting it over and over as I gladly am...
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