Hilarious story. Well-written and different in a good way. The only error I found was the spelling for 'waive' as 'wave'. Please edit the same.
Keep writing. Cheers - Swetha
Lol... seriously a laugh riot. Well written work and oh-so-hilarious. It made my day. I totally sympathize with the protagonist inspite of knowing it's a fictional character and that is saying something. Keep writing. Cheers - Swetha
Beautiful poem. Well-written. I am not much of an expert with poems but can say yours is lovely. The ending came as a pleasant surprise. Would like to read more of your work. Keep writing. Cheers-Swetha
Amazing storyline. Very gripping too although it takes time to get acquainted with the many characters. But that said, I understand that the story demands so many characters. I really found the story too good, and would love to read the rest of it. Keep writing. My best wishes to you.
As far as the grammar and editing goes, I think there are quite a few spelling errors and punctuation/capital errors. Please do correct them. If you need help, I would be more than happy to help you.
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