Solely enticed by the prospect of getting Gift Points I set out to read your poem. But do not let my shallow intentions mar my words.
Going by content I'd say that it was a poignant tryst that we have often gone through. Since the topic you have chosen is on that most of us can relate to, your words are very penetrating.
Honest out pour of emotion, such as yours, is always refreshing.
But amateurs as we all are, we must remember that this is a learning curve. There is always room for betterment.
Different ways of expressing the same ideas must be explored to find the best possible one
But I appreciate your work.
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