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Review by vijay Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
The poem conveys the emotions of the ignored lover realistically ..... good work
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
The poem brings out a good comedy quite lively.
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Review of Castle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Good poem. I liked the thought and simplicity of the language. In third line there is spelling error, which you may like to correct.
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Review of Grace  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
great inspirational poem..
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Review of First Kiss  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
It's pictorial depiction of first kiss, the wordings are near perfect. I enjoyed reading the poem and liked the last two lines most.
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Review of Dinner and a Book  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
A nice short story but I could not get the connection between the fairy tale book and the dialogue between husband and wife.
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Review of Papa's Fence  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It a short story well written. It delivers the intended message quite directly. I do not know the origin or the region from where it comes but appears like a traditional wisdom story for children.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
The poem describes the gloomy situation in depressing words. Good work.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Interesting story gives a fun reading
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Review of Spelling wirds!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Funny Interesting article full of spelling mistakes .....
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The poem ends on an optimistic note. The theme of not cursing self and looking for positives in difficult situations is brought out nicely in the poem. It's a god read and I enjoyed it.
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Review of His Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It is a very short story that conveys the message. The Internet world and particularly the social media creates illusion. The character of the story is painted in very few words. I like the last line and it is the punch line of the story. Contests like this having limitation on word count are interesting and brings best from the author.


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Review of Forms of Fear  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
The poem in free form makes reader think about the fears differently. Bright use of language in this meaningful poem. I appreciate the thought that fear is part of one's being. It is impossible to be fearless but at the same time excessive fears affect health dangerously. I find few lines repetitive, but overall good reading experience.


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Rated: E | (3.5)
The story is humorous and the incident is nicely described. Reader can feel the incident - the aftermath of a failed Halloween party. The emotions of the boy and his mother are painted brightly. I could not exactly appreciate the meaning behind the title of the story- "The slightest clue". Overall good reading experience.


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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Humorous poem about the girl in India (may be 25 years ago), who is prospective bride. Pictorial depiction making it a good read.


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Review of Helen MCGummer  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Very short story with strong emotions. It has good impact on readers.


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Review of Itzpapalotl  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Good horror story with a mix of mythology. Probably it will be good idea to add explanatory foot note about the goddess. The end of the story appears to me to be incomplete.


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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Religious article with easy to understand language. It conveys the writer's feelings truly and make reader to think about the spiritual way.


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Rated: E | (3.5)
Very emotional commentary on destiny and affection between two friends. Nicely worded poem, enjoyed reading it.


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Rated: E | (3.5)
Its a good horror short story. It gradually increases the anxiety of reader to know further. I felt that the story is sort of incomplete. Overall good effect..


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Review of What I Have Lost  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Nice poem. I liked the line "No hole would be there
If you had not formed it" We are blessed with many positives in our life but have a tendency to complain when we lose one of them. Lets be thankful for what we good we have got.


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Review of My Computer Story  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I felt like reliving my own experience about computers. However, in my case, I could use the PC when I was 16. Nice article and today it has literally become part of life.


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Review of A Positive Death  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The article gives an unusual perspective on death. It makes its point quite obvious, worth pondering upon. I will like to share that a man who has come closer to death but was saves - for example a man who suddenly suffered heart attack, taken to hospital quickly and survives through angioplasty can tell how he felt when he was in ambulance being taken to hospital or how a victim of a road accident felt when he survives after a multiple surgeries in short time. At one point of time, man will come close acceptance of death and that moment he will feel relaxed as well.


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Review of Eruptions!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
The poem describes how the nature of a silent or introvert person can get converted into a volcano, a thought to be pondered upon. Good read.


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Review of Musings  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I read the article but it is difficult to understand the meaning. Shall be glad to hear some thoughts from the author that gives whole meaning to the idea.


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