The story pathway by Lyrabelle, Intrigues and makes you hungry for more! I can only imagine how the mystery will unfold. I like it so far! I detested the rape, and raping of others but realize that this was a tool to launch the character toward the ultimate goal.
An Age Changing Experience No.1642687 starting with840505 - ending 3221498 Nice story beginning to end of path so far. It allows for someone with imagination to add their ideas, to continue from here. Rate this story-4
I love it! Makes me want to read on, so continue on. Maybe examples or how it works for Appalachian Witchy Woman. When you do E-mail me, so I can enjoy some more of your story. Witchy woman is also a great song from my school days. I remember a dance and that was a theme song with slide projections on a screen. I'm a Newby so my G.P. is limited but I'll share 1/2 of my balance.
Thank you for writing a short nice piece of literature!
W. Reece
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