This individual takes nothing for granted.
The 'width, breadth and height" all blessings
and you have a strong hold on it
"The width" love.
"The breadth" everything in its season.
"The height" same yesterday, today and tomorrow.
eternal..coming from the "Soul"
Beautiful poem. I love the gentle, kind and loving soul.
"Ten years gone" and time goes so fast. If we only knew
how precious each moment is. "And instead of moving on
I moved away" taking everything with me. Its like we carry
a backpack of "not letting go" it weights heavily. But its
only an illusion. You are free.
Love and forgiveness of self will give each individual their
wings.
I hope and pray you have happiness always :)
Life can change in a moment. This individual
has been through a tough time.
Where you say "Cancer took more, then one father's life."
That can mean the life of the one living..everything changed
for this person..life once known is drastically different.
Then it states: "Time will go on" and balance will come again because
"love is for sure." It keeps him/her going. He/she has found strength.
When you say "Life hangs in a balance On a double edge sword." The person
learning to walk in between :)
"Chaotic world" a noisy mind. Disorder in the circle.
It goes round and round like a Ferris wheel. We observe
what's going on and pick up "The world all around.Day in
and day out" with dread, horror and uneasiness. Panic..
the sky is falling.
I agree with you one hundred percent that one must quiet the
mind.."One must seek Meditation" One will find heavenly
peace "To our Soul" where "Stillness of thought" lives.
The body needs to mend. Sometimes we take on so much
there's no time to thread the needle.
"The eyes are to see" but we block our sight with constant clutter.
We end up looking through a peep hole. One needs to open windows
unlock doors to the soul. :) awakening to a new perception..finding vision :)
I like your poem. It opened my mind :) I feel the breeze :)refreshing
"Wrong turn, wrong direction." Everything seems right :)
"And you promptly right your mistake" a change was made.
One is moving in the right direction.."you have learned"
that's "A very logical and rational life lesson."
Fear brings blindness..something is hidden.
The absence of fear reveals truth. One moves
on and it's the "greatest medicine known to all..."
Forgiving.."Proceed with care"
Nice poem. I get several stories in my head when I read this.
I like that. Thank you for sharing
Where your poem says "I will hate every bit of it" do you really mean that.
A loving heart and soul looks for the good. How can a "Troll" be something
more if he/she is keep from the love.Trolls are those who need a gentle hand.
Are these supernatural beings? We must keep an open mind in order to learn
and understand. Pushing them away will draw them further into the woods..
in caves, under rocks. I do love my woods though :) I don't mind being under a rock.
There are unacceptable behaviors and its best to let one know or just walk away
but hating interferes with a loving heart, soul and mind.
Interesting poem. Im happy the person found life again.
It never left. Finding that inner light brings beauty from heaven.
It takes on a nostalgic moment reminding us that we have been there before.
It blossoms into understanding "As came to know" peace and love always.
So nice embracing warmth. Let love shine.
I'm thinking Sirens by Pearl Jam. Love that song.
Where you say "Drown as he drowned" is this the sea of love
Now Im thinking Fleetwood Mac :) Love that too.
Your lyrics are good. I can get into it. When I look at the title after
reading the song, I'm thinking that the sirens are a flare of some sort.
I mean..when we say or do something, we are hoping
someone is listening. Its like we give one another a red flag that signals
a rescue needs to be made. Maybe not even a
rescue always but needs to be recognized. I hope I make sense.
I guess Im trying to say, communication is so important. We hear but
miss the call or we get the call but lose the signal.
I like this poem a lot. I love this especially "There's no one here, til I turn on the light."
This is how life is. Everyone decides what they'll see. We turn the light on to
things that really aren't there but we create them..if that makes sense :)
But then there are things we don't see unless the window is open and the sun is
out. It gives us another sight of what is. Like abstract art. Its everywhere.
We all have an inner eye.
He does not hate ..God is all about love. Its so wonderful to
acknowledge him, that's a beginning. It joys him that you are
voicing your concerns. Communication opens doors. Patience
will pull you though. God gives life. People bring death within without
faith, love and hope.
I hope this person finds the peace they long for. I pray they keep
disclosing their emotions in his direction..better things will come
"Miracless" there's a tune with that title. Also Miracles by Jefferson Starship. I it very much.
Where you say "my problem was that, that I was always searching for good in people"
Looking for the graciousness in others is a wonderful thing. People with inner peace
find the blossoms on their path. Soon one will have a bouquet and a wonderful
fragrance of living.
Your poem is interesting. One can read through the eyes. Eyes reveal truth that
can guide you. Its gives insight to what's real..integrity. Seeing is the secret.
Where you say: "I'll never see the beauty of your lives as you go on...." I feel
this individual carried a candle. She wore the "biggest, brightest smile"
in hopes of better day..if not for herself then for others. She had courage.
Fear can be relentless..but only if we feed it. Always "wear your biggest, brightest smile" know that
you are in the arms of an angel. The darkness fades. She was not defeated.
You like your pot :)
Some will take advantage of this..the area they find
is weakened and damaged. Watch out for potholes.
Using pot as a medicinal use can be very helpful.
We do have to be careful in opening all the windows
and doors..we'll need a repellent..bugs can get in.
I like your piece. Lots of information here.
Are you a 420 :)
This story made me smile. I think that's the same little guy who took my
pot...of gold :) They seem to be quick and like to hum a lot. Some green men
like mechanical devices. Did you make sure nothing else was taken :) I hope
it wasn't a borrowed car..that would not be good. :)
"Your Baby" Something a person loves. It can go beyond that..maybe obsession. :)
One hangs on tight knowing nothing last forever but maybe this time it will. :) It
becomes comic.
Someone missing.. We can have others near or friends to stand by but
"The road each one of us must walk alone" Im so happy "hope remains."
As the song plays, its nice knowing the tune. Walking to the sound
of wisdom. One can look back and see the good :)
My brain is taking me to a Biblical time then to John Lennon :) Both are excellent.
I think John was into a different kind of milk with his honey :)
The Bible stores everything. One has to enter to shop :) How tasty his bread is
with the warmth of Jesus embracing the moment. The drink is so refreshing.
I wish your 'IF" would come true. IMAGINE all the people living life in peace. Some might
say you're a dreamer but you're not the only one :)
I like this poem.
When we read how Jesus suffered, it doesn't
express how bad it really was. We know he died
for our sins..all of us..that's a lot of pain. Do we understand it.
Jesus had tremendous strength..he went through a lot of torture
enormous suffering. I think when you mention how
the earth moved and "the veil is rent in twain" that's
powerful. But people are still skeptics like doubting Thomas.
It is finished and now its up to us. Our choice is ours to make.
I hope none of us have a grave of tears. Follow God and The angels rejoice when
we come home. It is love. A world "of the greatest love" we will ever see.
There's so much to explore in Heaven, people to meet, places to go :) God is good.
You struck my cord and this came out. I hope you don't
mind me writing this.
As she stared at the beast in their bed
she did not blink, she looked ahead.
She reached under his pillow took the gun
grabbed the baby..she did run.
He will not touch us ever again.
All the suffering is at an end.
Getting some help, seeking a network
will help one stay free from that jerk.
Domestic violence is horrific.
Your poem is feel provoking. I like the way its written.
Good job.
Heavy poem. I like it very much. I love the title too.
Someone/something needs to break the silence
around this individual. This site WDC is a good place. It can
turn the noise inside to song. The emotions can
work together to form a dance. Putting ones experiences
into positive action. The "cement" you speak of goes with
the builder..the architect. The life situations we live goes with
the structure..we all have to work with this. Everyone has the tools.
I love this where you say "aerial view" Its something more :) awesome.
You found your wings. :) becoming "an astral presence" it sounds
magnificent..a better view for sure. This person looks from all sides.
Amazing poem. I enjoyed reading it. I kept seeing images..I like that.
Thank you for writing it :) I hope to see more from you.
Wow..powerful! Did you know that your science can work
with spirituality. Honest. I know that there is something
given by God that helps us to connect with him..its in our
brain..sorta like a wireless signal. When we have out of body or
near death experiences it becomes strong. When we see
angels or encounter someone/something celestial, its that same indicator
that joins us with nature..to God. So amazing.
Please don't give up on your thought..someone up there is trying to reach you :)
You have a signal. :)
I really like your poem. I love reading about the thoughts of scientists :)
This poem could be of someones father or grandfather.
The grandfather is so wise. Like the tree they both share
"bark so knarled, twisted and scarred!"
AND it is the "home to the gray squirrel and a sight to see!",
"the lessons learned." Grandpa can be "Stoic and silent" or
"The Storm of The Century" but "The strength and wisdom passed on to me" :)
so wonderful.
Very, very good poem. Thank you for sharing. You gave me a smile. :)
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