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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very good story
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very enjoyable poem with a good flow and a good message that the lives of others are not always as good as them seem.
The other issue I have, and it is a very small issue, is that the section about the rabbit being the best them they can be felt unnecessary. I feel that message is understood by that point in the poem.
Keep up the good work supplying the world with light.
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