BRAVO!!!!! This was beautifully written. I liked how you developed the characters... Is there going to be more? If so I am truly excited to keep reading...
This was Hilarious!!!!!!!! I could not stop laughing. Maybe you could add on to this? It could be going somewhere with this story.... Definately look more into this because I truly enjoyed it :) and I hope there is more to come that is similar. :)
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