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Review by Silvia Romerez Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
That sounds like some personal experience. Hey, I stumbled upon your work through a random read; I'm a new author here but from a writer's pov, this seems quite decent. The chapters are a bit short for my liking but I guess that depends upon you but overall impression from just this read: Well done! But I think it would have been a bit more idyllic if u had described the scenes on top of the mountain a bit more intricately but I wouldn't base the entire story on just one chapter, so keep on writing ig! You're doing well and good luck!


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