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I've just edited an item in my portfolio:
Thanks to K5Rakitan for reviewing the piece! I had written the whole thing as one long paragraph to try and disorient the reader and make the piece un-navigable to gave a sense of not being in control - which is what is happening to the subject of the piece and her family. But perhaps it just made it difficult to read. I've split it into paragraphs and made a few other changes to see if that's better. |