Rema's Notebook - Writing.Com

May 19, 2014 at 10:34am • Edited

now guys we will finish the store of none and amona,ok amona decide to leave the house and don talk to her parents becuase amona parents did something wrong to stand with other people and not stand with there daughter.amona left the house and amona parents come back to the house they were looking for her and amona sister told them that she left of them.amona parents doesnt care they said she will be back but eman did not come back and they forget about her amona get ready to collage and she worked but she missed her family but she send them money every month and they doesnt know who is senting them money amona worked and she have a big house and money and a good job then after years she got back to see them and told them who was senting money for them all of this years.amona come back she see her mom siting and crying mom was crying for who you have to tell me we will finish the story later....

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Rema

May 15, 2014 at 10:12am

There were an fight in a family house one day they all were fighting with each other the mom and dad was saying the wrong thing but they thouht it was right but the truth it was not there was a girl in school who tell one of the family girl that she will beat her up the girl name nono she is selfish and a nono and the family girl named amona she is very nice but she doesn't like to anybody say any bad word to her and that girl tell her bitch and she got mad that how come everybody respect me in school and this girl come and tell me bad word.Amona fight with nono and ponch her in face. amona come back home mom and dad of amona try to beat her up about what she did but they couldn't becuase she didnt lit them and amona you know she wasn't wrong so amona sisters stand with her when the mom and dad was trying to fight amona,amona said that nono came and tell her bitch and nono tell her father that amona tell her bitch and there happenned a fight in both families.the father of nono came to amona house and start to say bad words and then he goes,amona mom and dad go to nono family and say sorry and ohh god that day amona was shoked and so mad of her family that they don respect there daughter feelings and what she said and they beileve the bad girl and go to say sorry amona decide to don talk to her family and leave the house after that i will finish later the story for u....

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Rema

Apr 7, 2014 at 10:14am

I have to be a nurse and i am not sure i do not know what to do and my teacher today tell me to write three papers about why did i picked the job and am trying and trying.

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Rema

Apr 7, 2014 at 10:37am

Thank you so much you are so nice.

Rema

Apr 7, 2014 at 10:38am

i will i just need some time to put all of it here.

Rema

May 3, 2014 at 8:36pm

i cant think about it its like i have to write three pages.

Rema

Apr 7, 2014 at 10:20am

In the world there are alot lier's but you can't know them untill you met them.thats what poeple are now half of the world are lier's and when we met them we love them but after you figure out they just try to go and igonor.when poeple igonor your feeling and you igonor them at the same way that they do that way you will not hurt your self or hurt them becuase they try to hurt you the first time.
that's what poeple are now.

by:Rema al hallaq

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Rema

Mar 13, 2014 at 10:03pm

there is a big place that the people and all of them go to there work,there was a family two kids and father with mother they lived with happniss the father knew a day that his wife cheat on him with another man. he got hurt a'lot and he decide to take his from her and kill her without anybody know. that night was so rain that the kids slept in there room. the husband tell his wife to go out with him at night,he told her lets go in the car and we will be back home in a short time.the woman get in the car with her husband and it was night. he took her to a land, he killed her there and he get back home at night and he cleaned his car he wash it and put it in the carage he go to his room and slept. in the afternoon the police come to his house and take him to talk to him and they tell him that his wife has been killed.they tell him how did your wife go do you know he said no. they tell him did you get out yesterday he said no i did not get out yesterday.the police man told him give me the keys of your car i want to look into it. the police man open the car with the keys and then he looked at the husband and told him you are the killer.how did you said you did not get out yesterday and you took your wife and kill her and then get back home and clean the car and you did not leave in the car anything that you kill her but there something you did not watch it that is the one you clean the water with from the glass when it was rain.when i open your car i see that it was open that means that you took your wife and kill her and come back home the police man said there nothing goes without a reason.they take him to the jail and he stayed all his life in the jail.

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Janine

Mar 13, 2014 at 11:29pm

This is very interesting. Try reading it out loud to see if you can hear awkward phrasing. English may be a second language and that may be contributing to the phrasing. Keep working on your ideas and see if you can get it added as a static item in your portfolio using the create option. Good luck. :)

Rema

Mar 12, 2014 at 11:38pm

hi my good poeple,i will like who ever go on my stories to see those and read them.

the love is do and touching goes like a perfum and it is lovely with everything. the love and hope is the one who make you strong,what everything going on is the best thing.

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Rema

Mar 12, 2014 at 11:32pm

There was a woman her name is lenda, she was 50 years old. she was a farmer,and all the poeple used to love her because she is good and smart. A day come and lenda seen a little wolf. he was hungry and weak and she took him and go to the cheap and goat land. she put him infront of the goat,he drink milk from the goat, day and day after the wolf get bigger. Lenda get back home and she see the wolf eating her goat the one who gave him her milk to drink. Lenda was cring and screaming, and she tell him how did you eat the mom who gave you the milk and for real i think that u will not eat her but you are a wolf that eat those poor animals . all the people cried with lenda and hurting.god give every animal what to do when they are hungry and the goat was his meal.

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