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Welcome to wdc, I just gave you a review of your argument against the relevance of Christianity. I do not mean to discourage you with it. or for you to take it as a personal attack. I actually mean to encourage you to take another swing at it and attempt to put more weight behind your arguments. Right now it reads like a poorly supported opinion but I know you can do better. Your writing is clear you just need to research a little further. There are many highly disputable verses in the bible. Search those out, I would be glad to reread your next attempt and play "devil's advocate" to help you strengthen your arguments. You can send me a link to any revision or other articles by using the format {bitem:xxxxxxx} where the x's are replaced with the item number of your article. You can right-click on my handle to find a shortcut to email me the link or you can respond to this comment with it and I will receive a message that you have commented. |