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| I'm really proud of this one, I like the scene of the story and I enjoy writing simple stories so check it out and let me know your opinions and be sure to give me critique :) |
| I've added a new item to my portfolio: it's my first short story, give me your honest review and tell me how I could improve, I could use some friendly critique as I plan on writing more stories, already working on my second one :) |
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