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I've just edited an item in my portfolio:
 Swimming Open in new Window. (E)
A dip in the pool forever changes Demir's relationship with his friends and his worldview.
I fixed the "anthing" typo and fleshed out the four boys a bit more. Any further ideas will be useful!
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